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Reviewer: scarlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/05 12:45 am Title: Dating Dilemmas

i love it, you know. that thing about mixing up brian's character. he's angelic face could be so deadly!

Author's Response: Maybe we should have had another title for the story! Good call!

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/05 12:23 am Title: Dating Dilemmas

Hey gurlas, you have done yourselves here I love the story but oh no Ori and Howie I hope this little incident get fix, that ori realize that he was only playing and that she iniciated everything. Can I have more

Author's Response: Funny how girls over-exaggerate for good reasons, huh?

Reviewer: scarlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/05 08:10 am Title: Dating Dilemmas

since then, i'm beginning to have an idea about that part of Oriana's past, that's why how much she knew that kevin is a good guy for her Mom, she can't fully trust him. oh, i wish i could be her friend and soothe her worries and troubles even for just a while. i wish Howie could be able to help her in some sort of way to make her feel alright and take all those skeletons away.. :( on the first part of the Chapter, this is the story where i can really imagine Brian on the dark side, your writing is effective and it wanted me to hate but love his character at the same time. more please :D :D

Author's Response: Glad that Oriana's past is finally starting to make sense. It'll get a lot clearer as we progress through the story. And, glad that we're making a realistic portrayl of Brian being dark. Sometimes you want to mix up a character's personality but only end up screwing up. So, thank you!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/05 03:06 am Title: Dating Dilemmas

awww...no Oriana!!! *sniffles* I can understand all the visions from her past coming back, but howie would never ever hurt her. And she possible just ruined everything with him! Nooooo! they are so cute together! Brian and Teags seem to be getting along nicely! Lets hope he doesnt screw her over though...stupid snake! lol. Loved it...thanks for updating! *GRINS* Do it again soon!

Author's Response: Visions finally make sense, how 'bout it? And, Brian's a stupid snake? *smirk* We might have to include that in detailing!