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Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/05 06:50 pm Title: Developing Relationships

okay, first of all....Brian is a complete DICK WEED!!! he has no right ruining Teags friendship with Oriana. Seriously...I fear to see their first encounter. Howie is so unbelievably sweet...im glad that he and Ori are back together! ANd looks like Ori is giving Kevin a fair chance/ Good thing...he's a good guy! Awesome chapter!!! ANd you should make Howie wear the pink shirt....that is priceless!

Reviewer: scarlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/05 04:23 am Title: Developing Relationships

I think that i will never be over Brian..i hate him and i love him! i guess i do have penchants for bad boy characters in the story, huh? *winks* haha. anyway, nice chapter..i hope that Oriana would finally gave in, ease her doubts towards Kevin and just accept him. but then, i know that it wouldn't be that easy considering 'the past' she had. it's sad. i wished her to be happy, more happy because she and Howie are now together. yey! let me have that kiss again . . .

Author's Response: *SMACK* (it was another kiss...)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/05 02:31 am Title: Developing Relationships

Aww. SO sweet! I LOVED when Howie kissed her to shut her up! And I *SO* LOVED Kevin in this chapter!!!!!! Whoo-hoo!!!! But somebody SERIUOSLY *NEEDS* to tell on Brian! The stupid dumb f*ck prick! And now Teagan's gonna hate Orianna all 'cause she needed Howie jyst once - did she even SEE Teagan to begin with?!?! Like, dude. If you're in LOTS of pain, you scream for the first person you see!!! YEESH!!!!!! F*CK 'EM!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: So, are you for or against Oriana's reaction when she broke her arm?

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/05 10:38 pm Title: Developing Relationships

H3ey that was nice how a horrible thing bring out happy things . Like Kev and Ori o a nice little step and howie and her back together that is really nice.

Author's Response: True horror always tends to bind lovers together, especially in fan fiction. Haha.