Date: 08/05/11 04:56 am Title: 25
This chapter made me kinda laugh, just because AJ is such a chicken. He was worse than poor Brian. Then it reminded me of AJ in The Thirteenth Step how he would jump at everything and mumble things when Nick dragged him to explore the creepy house. lol.
Author's Response:
I guess I really do make AJ a chicken often I my fics lol I picture him being like that in real life for some reason. Maybe it's the anil polish? LOL Thanks Erika
Date: 08/05/11 03:38 am Title: 24
Oh hell no!! Mare you are just evil...hahaha that was so out of the blue, the lights going out. I'm terrified of the dark!
Author's Response:
Aww lol I know i'm kind of bad, I am not a fan of the dark either.
Date: 08/04/11 10:50 pm Title: 22
Oh man that must be so scary. Having to go back to where it all happened. I have so many thoughts right now on where you are going with this. Gotta keep reading.
Author's Response:
Aww, yes, i'm looking forward to what you think. Thanks Erika!
Date: 08/04/11 10:19 pm Title: 20
I must say that was a bit hard to read. I kept cringing at the pain of ripping your own hair out. OUCH!
Author's Response:
I don't even recall that part lol but yes, sounds disturbing lol Yikes! !
Date: 08/01/11 11:05 pm Title: 30
WOW! I made it through the whole story! Yay me! Whoot, whoot! As you know, I'd never have read this, if it weren't for the challenge...so I'm glad I participated. You're a good story teller, Mare...cuz I really feel like you were depicting a true story, as if you knew them and were around when it happened...which I knopw you were presenting yourself as Brian, so I guess in a weird twisted kind of fictional way, you WERE there, LOL! Anyways...good story. I've gotta go fill out the survey thingy now. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this Kristal! I really appreciate it. I know it's not exactly in your comfort zone but I hope it made you a semi fan of the genre at least? LOL I promise I don't always maime the boys. Mentally torture on occasion but most of my stories are actually dramadies. Thanks again!
Date: 08/01/11 11:02 pm Title: 26
You gotta be kidding me! The same hotel too?!? What are the flippin odds?! I'd flat out refuse to go in...like...take me somewhere else! I'd sleep in a freakin McDonald's booth...or in the corner of a dang gas station, LOL!
Author's Response:
I know! That was plain cruel on my part, but I figured I might as well go with it. I mean what other form of torture was left? LOL
Date: 08/01/11 11:00 pm Title: 24
Go freakin' figure...they just HAD to end up back there, didn't they? I can't even imagine how nerve wracking that would be! I'd be flipping out, big time! I'm not entirely surprised Brian wrote to that doctor...but I didn't expect himt o actually ask about him. I guess that it made him feel a little less guilty about the whole incident...I know I'd feel terrible for nearly ruining someone's life and/or career over something that didn't even turn out to be real. Anywasy...still enjoying the story.
Author's Response:
Once again I didn't remember where you meant by back there, then I thought maybe it was Philly? I had totally forgotten I had them go back there at the end. I have such a bad memory. LOL Sometimes i'm like "Did I write this?"
Date: 07/26/11 10:06 am Title: 18
These past two or three chapters have been so emotional. Seriously bringing tears to my eyes. You just wanna hug them all, but especially poor Nick. I'm still in awe that he remembers all that...I know he has more to tell and I'm anxious to find out what it is. *bites nails* I can't sleep...I need to read moooore.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for all the reviews Erika. I'm glad that you seem to be enjoying the story and your journey into my nutso mind! :O)
Date: 07/26/11 09:29 am Title: 15
*cries* I'm afraid it's not going to be that easy!
Author's Response:
lmao is it ever?
Date: 07/26/11 09:20 am Title: 14
This chapter was sad. Too sad. I can definately feel myself in that bathroom with Nick and Brian. Awesome Chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! For some reason I always have emotional bathroom scenes in my fics lmao I have only realized this recently. Weird.
Date: 07/26/11 09:09 am Title: 13
OMG...this is just as torturous to me Brian. I'm waiting for Nick to say something and he goes back to sleep.
What did he remember?!?
Author's Response:
I know! Sleepy Nick!!
Date: 07/26/11 08:08 am Title: 11
OMG I'm just as confused as Brian (In a good way of course)!
Author's Response:
LOL good? Maybe?
Date: 07/26/11 06:20 am Title: 10
NOooooo that can not be!! Brian helping that awful man to carve up Nick. Then again did have have much of a choice?
Author's Response:
I know! That was pretty warped, okay forget what I said before. I guess I am a tiny bit twisted. LOL
Date: 07/26/11 05:34 am Title: 8
EEEEK NIck is awake and I'm dying to know what's going to be his reaction. If he will remember anything...which with your twisted mind...probably not.
Author's Response:
Me, twisted? YOu must be confusing me with someone else! hehe ;)
Date: 07/26/11 05:20 am Title: 7
Ugh...I can't imagine the agony that Brian is going through. It's not physical, but emotional which could be slightly worse. I like how strong the groups bond is. Even though it happened to Brian and Nick the guys are just as affected.
Oh lordy I have so many questions I need answered. I should keep reading...hehe...
Author's Response:
Aww, I love waking up to a box full of reviews! Yeah, I think emotional abuse is so much worse than the physical stuff. Poor Brian! :O(
