[Report This]Date: 10/02/04 01:16 am Title: 5
What the hell? How did Brian get Nick's blood on him like that? WTF!?!?!?! I WANT ANSWERS, DAMMIT!!!!
UPDATE A.S.A.P.!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Aww lol Sorry to get you so frustrated. You'll get another update on Wednesday.
[Report This]Date: 10/01/04 02:24 am Title: 4
this is fantastic as always Mare. Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you SO much Beth :D
[Report This]Date: 09/30/04 06:07 am Title: 4
what a sicko..and poor little Nicky
...sniff..he gotta be ok
Author's Response: aww :( lol
[Report This]Date: 09/30/04 02:31 am Title: 4
Oh holy crud, poor Nicky, that man was sick I hope they catch him. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :D I hope they catch him too!
[Report This]Date: 09/29/04 07:43 pm Title: 4
excellent job you deserve all stars
Author's Response: THanks Anita! You rock. :D Have I mentioned? lol
[Report This]Date: 09/29/04 04:53 pm Title: 4
Holy sheesh...that dude was freakin' psychotic, yeah? Man, trippy. Pity to Nick...a horrible thing to have happen. Not that he had much say in the matter. This was a good update. A good sense of tense drama. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Alex]
Author's Response: Thank s again Alex :D
[Report This]Date: 09/29/04 04:42 pm Title: 4
Yeah, as terrible as it sounds, damnit, I want to know what went on inside that hotel room. We're just getting bits and pieces from Brian's mind. The poor guy. And seeing Nick like that had to be a little overwhelming. And getting carved to pieces with the word 'Mine' can we say, ouch? Sorry, I haven't been reviewing, the pain of being a college student. But I love the work. Great job.
Author's Response: First of al thanks for the review! I know how busy this time of year is I totally understand. NO worries i'm just glad you're reading it :D
and secondly since we are seeing this through BRian's eyes we have as hazy a time as he does. Once he starts remembering a little more then we'll start seeing a little more :D
[Report This]Date: 09/29/04 04:35 am Title: 4
Whoa. *gasps* What kind of Bastard CARVES the word "Mine" into someone over & over & VOER!?!?!?! Dammit! I feel SO bad 4 Nick! N I bet Rok's havin' those dreams 'cause Nicky's tryin' 2 show him what happened n shit, so that they can stop the sick bastard - and soon!
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. How do you know how many stars u got? Lol.
Author's Response: Aww I know it's pretty disturbing :(
You'll get another update on Saturday or maybe even Friday night ;)
Oh and if you want to know how many stars you have just go to recent stories and when your story pops up you'll see them. I did have 5 stars up until a day or so ago ;( aparently someon was less than pleased with my Nick torturing lol *Sigh*
I'm just kidding by the way I promise i'm not an ego maniac. LOL
[Report This]Date: 09/26/04 12:54 am Title: 3
Love the story update it ASAP when you can thanks!!!!!
Author's Response: THanks! :D and twice a week I promise lol
[Report This]Date: 09/25/04 07:36 pm Title: 3
Awesome chap, Mare. So one question though, was the scene with the Darth Vader dude real or was Brian just dreaming it? Or maybe even an drug induced hallucination/nightmare? Guess the possibilities are endless. Good work though and update soon! [Alex]
Author's Response: Hello Alex and to answer your question...i'm not going to LOL! You'll see what happens as we move along. Thanks for the review :D
[Report This]Date: 09/25/04 07:05 pm Title: 3
I cant take it anymore I wanna know what happend to Nick? stop torturing us please
Author's Response: aww lol it wouldn't be suspense without a little torture now would it? ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/25/04 06:41 pm Title: 3
Wow. Bet Brian dreamed that whole Derek Jones bit, but it seemed real, so he freaked. Bet thatz why he had trouble breathing - he thought Derek wuz gonna strangle him again. Update! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 09/25/04 05:53 pm Title: 3
awesome job keep up the great work
Author's Response: THanks Anita! ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/24/04 02:54 am Title: 2
Well dang, those dreams/nightmares were freakin' trippy! Pretty nutty... But this was a good one. Can only wonder how bad of shape Nick is in. Poor Brian also. Keep up the great work and update ASAP! [Alex]
Author's Response: THanks so much Alex. We'll find out about Nick soon :( and you'll get another chapter tomorrow :) i'm going to to try to be good and update at least twice a week on this one lol
[Report This]Date: 09/24/04 02:43 am Title: 1
WHOA! Hello! Very good beginning to a suspense thriller I'm sure this will be. Either way, it was a good start and I love anything you write. So this will most definitely turn out to be a good one! Keep up the good work! [Alex]
