Date: 07/24/11 10:18 pm Title: 5
I don't like that detective at all, but then again they do seem to pester people at their weakest momentst.
Hmmm now I'm really curious as to why Brian would have Nick's blood on him. Seriously this is twisted. lol.
Author's Response:
I struggled with the stereotypical jerk detective but I needed him in there lol It is a bit twisted, isn't it? lmao thanks for reading!
Date: 07/22/11 08:25 pm Title: 3
Ok. Maybe Brian is crazy...no he's not. Is it funny that I feel like Brian and I'm anxious to see Nick too. lol. I wanna know what is wrong with him. It sounds really bad.
Author's Response:
aww! I'm glad to hear you want to know what happened and are anxious to see him as well. :O)
Date: 07/20/11 08:07 pm Title: 17
Arg...I'm so anxious I don't even wanna pause to review! LOL! I'm like freaking out to find out what the hell happened! I'm so glad Nick is awake and Brian is remembering things. Hopefully everything will be explained soon!
Author's Response:
Wow, I can't believe you are on chapter 17 already! You rock Kristal and i'm a slacker. I'm only on the 2nd chapter of mine!! Thanks for reading and all the reviews. Slowly things will start falling into place now as far as memory. Have a safe trip to Orlando!
Date: 07/20/11 07:24 pm Title: 11
I'm confused. But yet, I get the feeling you want me to be.
Author's Response:
lmao there is always one chapter in every fic I write that someone says this. Yes, I like to occasionally leave people confuzzled.
Date: 07/20/11 07:18 pm Title: 10
Are you flippin' serious?!? Why Mare? Why?!? I'm glad Brian's memory is coming back...but I'm not entirely happy with the memories themselves. Ugh. Why must I see every event in my mind as it plays out? You know I purposely stay away from movies like this? LOL! If things keep up I might be in the stall right beside Brian.
Author's Response:
I actually think I know which chapter you're talking about. It was one of my favorites to write. If it's the strobes chapter. LOL Glad you can visualize everything that's going on.
Date: 07/20/11 06:04 pm Title: 8
NICK'S AWAKE!!! YAY! (And Brian has officially lost it..or HAS he?!)
Author's Response:
LOL perhaps? Again i'm going to go need to skim thorugh this story.
Date: 07/20/11 05:46 pm Title: 6
I feel bad for Brian. I wish I could just hug him and make it all better. (Odd since he is pretty much my least favorite, LOL) Still really anxious to figure out what the heck is going on and who did this. I'm sure I'm not lucky enough to find out at the end that it was all one huge nasty dream. I think I know you better than that. LOL
Author's Response:
He's my least favorite too lmao which is why this story was sometimes really hard to write. lol Sorry Brian!
Date: 07/20/11 05:37 pm Title: 5
Oh that's just twisted...Nick's blood on his hands?! Wow. Um...I...yeah...I don't even know where to go with that. I'm sure they will try pinning it on Brian...which is total bull dookie cuz he couldn't have beat himself unconscious or strangled himself. Can't they look at the bruises on his neck to rule that out? I mean, if the guy was so big, surely the bruises would be bigger than Brian's hand, thus indicating another person was there...right? Ugh. They better figure it out, dag nabit! (Yes I'm aware that my break was very short, LMAO! Dang you Mare!)
Author's Response:
Yeah, poor Brian. I'm sure nothing is worse than not remembering what happened to you or your best friend. :O)
Date: 07/20/11 05:02 pm Title: 4
Really? Really?!? Oh dear heaven...the writing is good...you have a good way of making people see what you're writing. I definitely picture it all in my mind. And now I'm going to take a break from reading because my poor tummy is SO queasy! I'll be back later. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment Kristal!
Date: 07/20/11 04:52 pm Title: 3
AAAAAAAAAAH! Ok...there goes any and all chance of me ever watching Star Wars again. Thanks Mare. :-P I'm so happy I didn't start reading this last night. I'm a weirdo when it comes to this stuff...*shudders yet again*...you may or may not be happy to know that this will DEFINITELY be invading my dreams tonight. I'm anxious to see what happens though. Oh...right...I'm supposed to be reviewing the story not just freaking out about what's happening. Well um...it's written well and I don't detect anything wrong with it...except the tummy ache it's giving me. LMFAO!
Author's Response:
LOL I have no idea what you're talking about with Star Wars. It's been so long since i've written this one, I am going to have to go skim to see what you're talking about. No worries, I enjoy reading your reactions more so than concrit every chapter. The suspense person in me enjoys the reactions. Thanks for reading it Kristal. I hope you realy enjoy it.
Date: 07/20/11 04:44 pm Title: 2
My tummy is twisting, LOL! I want to stop reading...I know I'm gonna have messed up dreams...but I can't...I'm hooked...I gotta find out what happened! Is Nicky ok? What did the guy do to him? Why did the guy do it to begin with? What the HECK is going on?!? *whines and goes to the next chapter*
Author's Response:
Eep! Sorry, hope you don't dream about this tonight. Like I told Erika, I'm a big cliffhanger type person, just wanring you ahead of time. lol
Date: 07/20/11 04:34 pm Title: 1
Oh dear...what have I gotten myself into?! *hides under my bed* So far it seems to flow well...other than there are a few things you word differently than I would, so I have to pause and re-read it, LOL. But that's not anything you can really fix, now is it? I didn't think so. Now...why is it that men always act all big and bold but then turn to puddles of goop when a situation like this arrives? I mean...where is the guy that stands up and kicks the bad guy's butt? Well obviously we know that guy isn't in the room with Brian and Nick, now don't we? Ha! Ok...I'm off to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, this isn't really a fluffy bunnies and rainbows type story. That's why I picked this one for the challenge. If you get creeped out easily it's probably best to read it during the day. I would probably turn into a pile of goop myself if that happened to me. LOL poor guys. I do torture them in this one. Thanks Kristal!
Date: 07/20/11 07:23 am Title: 2
This chapter was trippy. I wonder why he keeps having those dreams...they are creepy. Is that man real or just his imagination? Now I'm wondering what happened to poor Nick. It sounds like he's in bad shape!
Author's Response:
Once again, you shall see. Warning...if you've never read anything by me, i'm all about the cliffhangers. lol
Date: 07/20/11 06:39 am Title: 1
I really like the bond between Brian and NIck. I can imagine that was exactly how they were back in the day. Plus it already starts with some suspense. Who the heck is the Darth Vader guy?
Author's Response:
That is the underlying mystery of the story. I miss their early bond. Thanks Erika!
Date: 02/16/10 04:25 am Title: 30
Okay, every time I read this I STILL get chills. This story is amazing....love how you integrated real life into this, like Nick getting the tattoo and all. The story is captivating to the very end. I will probably read it over and over lol
