[Report This]Date: 12/17/03 09:45 pm Title: Shattered Dreams
Wow...poor AJ finding out like that that one of his best friends was raped...and poor Yasmine. I can't imagine what the other Boys reactions will be when they find out what happened to her! Great job...can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 12/17/03 07:02 pm Title: Stained Friendships
Great start to a story! It was so sweet of the guys to surprise Yasmine like that and have an Anniversary celebration for her. Poor AJ though gor grabbing the wrong thing, and her blaming him, saying that he did it on purpose. And then to leave to go into a safe enviroment away from 5 drunk guys, only for something so horrible to happen to her, and so close to the Boys too. Wow...can't wait to see what their reaction will be when they find out! I love your detail and description...very good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 02:01 am Title: The Trouble With Love
Oooo, this scene takes me back to the clinical sights. Delivering babies, taking care of new moms and little babies. That was about the best experience I had. Didn't have as much fun with the moms as I did the babies, but hey, this was a sweet scene. Little Faith brought into the world and...that creepy guy... Ewww.
[Report This]Date: 11/20/03 12:31 am Title: Have a Little Faith
Hmmm, Faith is coming. Great touch with the Bible exerpts for 'Faith.' Very well planned and well thought. Nice chapter - very long - the way we like'em!
Author's Response: Yup and just the way I planned it for ya, cause I know you love it nice and long! hehe.
[Report This]Date: 10/29/03 10:28 pm Title: Inside Your Heart
Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more. I want AJ and Yasmine to be a couple all ready lol.
[Report This]Date: 10/15/03 09:44 pm Title: Trouble In Paradise
Great chapter!! It's about time AJ told someone about his feelings. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 10/01/03 09:21 pm Title: Diverting Hearts
Awesome chapter. It looks like Yasmine is falling for AJ. YAY!! I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/03 04:52 am Title: Diverting Hearts
Awe! Yas is totally falling for AJ. The Nick thing was just a fluke, I know it! This K.C. fellow is definitely a freak. I think he might end up hurting Yassy... Uh-oh!
[Report This]Date: 09/24/03 08:45 pm Title: A Step Back
Great chapter!! I feel bad for Yasmine, LOL I liked them making fun of Howie's height.
[Report This]Date: 09/15/03 09:49 pm Title: Distilled Reality
Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more,
[Report This]Date: 09/06/03 04:40 am Title: Falling Deeper
Ooo, I sense the tension. AJ's gotta be hurting, but I kinda figured that Yasmine was heading toward Nick with some passion. I wonder what the creepy guy wants with the baby. Oh man, this is nuts!
[Report This]Date: 09/01/03 11:47 pm Title: Dreams Come True
AJ's such a weasle. Saying he doesn't like a chick when he does. I outta smack the crap out of him! Identifying her attacker will be hard, too. And if she recognizes the guy, he might not confess to the crime, and if he doesn't have any cruminal backgrounds... Dude, rape cases are the toughest, no matter what bruises and signs of injuries you have. And Kelvin is a little psycho. He's definitely going to make an interesting character.
[Report This]Date: 08/13/03 02:10 am Title: A Growing Affection
My friend craved peanut butter and pickles when she was pregnant... Frog legs is something FAR different from pickles and peanuts... The God punishment is a good question, but I could have blurted that out for all of them. Jezz, Jam! You're telling my story of hardships through God! Great story... Although something more should be going on inside Yasmine's head about the baby...
[Report This]Date: 08/06/03 02:18 am Title: A Step Back
Hey, jam I sent you an im to review, but i guess you didn't get it yet. Anyways, I think this story isvery good, and incredibly sweet. So update soon!
[Report This]Date: 08/05/03 02:58 am Title: A Step Back
Awe, poor Yasmine. I'd be devastated. I don't know if I'd do that cheery thing, but I probably would. It's easier to hide pain. Causes a huge explosion at the end, but it works. The poor girl. Can't wait for more.
