[Report This]Date: 07/25/03 12:38 am Title: Healing Soul
We've got a bun in the oven? Uh-oh. That sounds like trouble to me. Of course, I think that someone should at least tell her the road ahead instead of hiding it from her... Oh well... Everything always goes to Hell and back before it has a chance of getting better. Good Job, Jamelet!
[Report This]Date: 07/23/03 12:25 am Title: Stained Friendships
hey, i like the content of the story, but i dont like the way you use your verbs in the present tense only. it get's rathere annoying, but good start.
[Report This]Date: 07/22/03 01:59 am Title: Distilled Reality
That poor girl. I would be tore up inside, although I'd be taking out some heaps of revenge! Of course, I don't know if I'd be talking to the drunken hillbillies that got me into that mess in the first place. Oh well. Things have taken a turn for the worst and it's only the 3rd chapter! Good job, chickie!
[Report This]Date: 07/12/03 06:25 pm Title: Stained Friendships
Ouch, I knew I would like this story! Good job, Jamelet. The boys getting plastered is something I personally could never see them doing, but hey, that's why you have the better imagination! I like where it's going and I know that your faith in God is helping you direct this story. You did a terrific job and I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 07/12/03 06:44 am Title: Stained Friendships
Hey Jamelet!! I like the beginning of this story. I can't wait to read more!!
