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Date: 02/03/05 05:39 am Title: And Bolts In His Head

*mutters swear words about evil secutrity guard under breath* Shes NOT Fiiiiiiiiineeeee DAH. *Throws stones at secrity Guard* Hate you! Hate you! HATE you! Meh....Write more please--I'm anxious to read what happens next.

Author's Response: *laughs* I see you're enjoying yourself. But, instead of throwing stones, try a rock - it's much larger & hurts more. Lol. As for what happens next, you shall see. Trust me...tomorrow...

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Date: 02/03/05 04:49 am Title: And Bolts In His Head

poor Tesia, AJ's right about that bad feeling he has thoguh and if Aj was able to he woulda probably left and went to the hotel

Author's Response: He would've left, had he known. He's ignoring his gut feeling, as he's not sure who it's directed towards.

Reviewer: Jaded Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/05 03:05 am Title: But If A Monster Sat On The Edge Of The Bed

Whoa, the security guard is sick, poor Tesia and there's no one to save her

Author's Response: Yes, yes that he is. & there is no one but Teddy to save Tesia - & Teddy can't even do that.

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Date: 02/02/05 02:55 am Title: But If A Monster Sat On The Edge Of The Bed

wow.....I dont really know what to say about this chapter...so I'm just gonna say update. Update soon!

Author's Response: Oh, I shall. I'm actually almost finished writing it, but there's still a lot more chapters to go on here. Though, I believe they are getting shorter & shorter - lol. The last two at the end shall make up for al lthe short ones though - least, I'm hoping so. Hehe.

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Date: 02/02/05 02:01 am Title: Yo Zipper Face, You Wanna Piece Of Me?

That security guard is a pedophine, he's sick and even thoguh he gave Tesia a bath becuase she was sick, he sexually assualted her and hit her which is abuse

Author's Response: A pedo - what? Yes, he did do all that. Are you sure you wanna be reading this? It's gonna get darker, more disturbing, & disgusting...

Reviewer: ForeverRebel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/05 06:07 am Title: Yo Zipper Face, You Wanna Piece Of Me?

Man, that guy disturbs me and seriously needs to be smacked across the face--Heck Id do it personally if I had the chance! Let me at em! *Dives toward security guard* Heh. anyway, I am dying to know what happens next girly, so please hurry!!! Love ya *Ash*

Author's Response: Feel free to smack him all yah want gal. I shall personally hand him over to you once this is all done & over with.

Reviewer: Ashee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/05 06:00 am Title: If He Tried To Make Your Hair Turn White With Fright

o_O this is really interesting so far. I can't wait to read what happens next. Update soon hon!

Author's Response: Oh, I shall. Lol. I've been working on it off & on. By far, I think this is the most disturbing thing I've ever written.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/05 04:42 am Title: Put A Dead Skunk In His Pocket

Idiot security guard should get fired for what he did to Tesia

Author's Response: He would if the Boys knew what he was up to - but they don't, so...

Reviewer: JadedBlondie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/05 04:38 am Title: If He Tried To Make Your Hair Turn White With Fright

aww poor Tesia

Author's Response: Yes, poor little Tesia.