Date: 03/11/05 04:10 am Title: Grounded...
Cute chapter, poor Lenore didn't get to go to the barbaque, but loved how Bri snuck upstairs to see her
Author's Response: I love how Brian sneaks up to see her too! My favourite line: "How would you know where I went, unless you were following me?"
Lol.
Date: 03/11/05 03:47 am Title: Doll Fight...
I like it so far
Author's Response: Thank-you.
Date: 03/10/05 06:49 pm Title: Doll Fight...
This has got to be the most interesting story line that I've caught in awhile. And, each Carter child definitely has a personality unique to their own. What ever made you think to put BJ and Leslie as the hateful children? Pure gold. Just a little more detail will make this sure-fire. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I actually dreamt parts of this a few years ago (started this then too), & am working around the dream itself. B.J. & Leslie are mean because they are older - you'll find out more about that in later chapters - I think-lol. And what other details would you like to know? Ask & you shall recieve. Hard part is remembering which detail is for which child - lol.