Date: 07/17/05 12:30 pm Title: 13
ah hahahah.....nick and kev are detectives!! they should open up a buisness on the side lol....solve puzzles at each tour stop, ya know lol. love it.
Date: 07/17/05 11:47 am Title: 13
awesome update! I loved the descriptions, made me feel like i was there! this is such a good story & i can't wait for the next update!!!!
Date: 07/17/05 11:29 am Title: 13
Mers! I solved the code! LoL. =) Keep it up!
Date: 07/17/05 09:30 am Title: 13
hehehe I liked the little clues part it was like playing resident evil and I love you for making them solve it on the spot cuse I cant handle waitting for it to be solved ;) cant wait till the next update
Date: 07/14/05 02:56 am Title: 12
Shit. I'm lost. WTF are these people up too? And WHAT people!?!?!?! The campaign people?!?! And I do NOT like that cop who keeps bugging Nick!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I KNEW there'd be something in Kev's wallet, soon as yah said he threw it down carelessly-lol.
Author's Response: lol Lenni...you always crack me up with your reviews! and you get a cookie for guessing it right with kev's wallet, lmao! Thanks for the review btw :)
Date: 07/14/05 12:44 am Title: 12
This story is sooooooooo good. You are doing an amazing job mers. I can't imagine what's going to happen because the story keeps surprising me with every chapter. Can't wait for another update.
Author's Response: Thanks maria :) now if you would just update YBS! oh ok wait, those chaps are waiting for me, lmao! sorry! i'll get right on to it! ;)
Date: 07/13/05 03:53 pm Title: 12
You know my favorite part about this chapter is the banter between AJ and Nick on his side kick and Keivn's concern for gettign all the guys involved. Another awesome chapter you get a cookie! lol
Author's Response: ooohh yay! i hope it's chocolate? lol
Date: 07/13/05 03:48 pm Title: 12
yay drama!!!
Author's Response: YAY and you updated! lol
Date: 07/13/05 09:44 am Title: 12
this story is getting more complecated than I thought it would be ....but IT'S GOOD yay am all excited
Author's Response: heh...glad it's a good complication you're talking abt! thanks for the review :)
Date: 07/11/05 10:31 pm Title: 11
WOW! I was ticked that the chapter wasn't there but I didn't do anything cause I thought it was a computer glitz too and I crossed my fingers that it was fixed when I went to the site today. You are doing an awesome job with this story. It's unpredictible suspense and it's killing me LOL. Can't wait for the next update!!!
Date: 07/11/05 08:58 am Title: 11
god I need more of this story..I cant get enough of it... its like a drug....
Author's Response: I hope it's a good drug? lol
Date: 07/11/05 03:30 am Title: 1. House Call
You know I love thios chapter...I love the ides behind the memory stick I need one of those myself and now the guy has turned up dead yikes!! What does this mean for Kevin and the guys? Horribly mean cliffie so please update soon spank you spank you very much! :D
Author's Response: wheeee!! thank you thank you thank you! spanks u back!
Date: 07/11/05 02:54 am Title: 10
Dude! WTF was on that memory stick thingy?!?!?!?! & what in the Hell is a memory stick!?!?!
UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: aww lenni, chapter 11 is already up, i hope you get to see it. there was some technical glitch on AC so the chapter didnt show up, lmao
Date: 07/10/05 04:38 pm Title: 11
Mersey,
None of the chappies are showing.
Author's Response: ugh i know :( thanks for the heads up! I'm trying to get it reuploaded now :)
Date: 07/10/05 01:43 pm Title: 11
Nothing??! is that what they saw??? heheh
Author's Response: lmao Savana! you cracked me up! thanks for reviewing...im so sorry for the glitch, i hope you get to read it now, lol.