[Report This]Date: 07/10/05 01:20 pm Title: 11
lol, my thoughts exactly...even tho, none of the chapters are showing up :/. but about the futeristic thingy....think of men in black....thats what i was thinking up...only thats less futuristic cause like, the time fram was then lol.
Author's Response: lmao! actually you werent too far off. I was actually thinking of doing that to kevin...like he had being mind controlled to do things...of course that was too much for me to handle right now so i had to scrape that idea! lmao
[Report This]Date: 07/10/05 12:50 pm Title: 11
LOL!! Uh...mers, there's nothing there now THAT'S a mean cliffie!
Author's Response: heehee...freaked me the heck out!
[Report This]Date: 07/06/05 10:55 pm Title: 10
Wonderful chapter. I like the descriptions and you have AJ's character nailed! Can't wait to find out what they watched!!
Author's Response: Hey Jenna/Carrie! Now are you two the same person or there're 2 of you? lmao. Anyhoo, thank you for the review, im glad you're still liking it! I'll try to update again asap! :)
[Report This]Date: 07/06/05 10:36 pm Title: 10
I know am not gonna sleep too cuse I'll be thinking WHAT DID THEY SE??!!!
and I really really love this story
Author's Response: Hey Savana! Aww thanks for reviewing and loving this story so far :) and im sooo sorry you're not gonna be able to sleep, lol...I promise everything is answered (well, waht they see on the vid at least, lol) will be revealed. I'm half way done with the next chapter so as long as the brainfart stays away, i'll do my best to update again soon :)
[Report This]Date: 07/06/05 02:59 pm Title: 10
lol....well, now i know what a memory stick is....i was thinking it was soem futuristic device that if you break it, everyone around you loses their memory lol...i know, i know, crazy mind over here. so happy you updated! cant wait for the next.
Author's Response: LMAO Felicia! You're a trip! Although that would be an awesome story - a FUTURISIC device that will render ppl memory-less (lol) if broken! Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 07/03/05 03:19 am Title: 9
Okay, now I feel bad for both Kevin AND Nick - but when do I not? Is Nick not driving 'cause he lost his lisence, but don't wanna admit it to the other guys? Or is it 'cause he'd scared himself shitless?
UPDATE!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: hmmm you know, i gotta explain clearly abt the whole DUI thing...esp now that we know what the verdict is, my story for the DUI in this story doesnt sound realistic enough, but oh well, lol...we'll hv to make do somehow. *brainstorm*
[Report This]Date: 07/02/05 06:48 pm Title: 9
Wow...You finally updated! And I was just thinkin about this story recently too. Anyway great chapter way throw that twist in there at the end, I wasn't expecting that! Update again soon!
Author's Response: Hey Sam! glad to know you liked the twist, lol...i hope the next chap doesnt disappoint :)
[Report This]Date: 07/02/05 04:26 pm Title: 9
Wow I sooo wasn't expecting that twist, neither the mean cliffhanger of course. Great job mers! I can't wait for more. Please update soon mersey :)
Author's Response: thanks maria. and u need to update YBS! lol
[Report This]Date: 07/02/05 02:39 pm Title: 1. House Call
WOW! I'm glad I read this story so far! At first I was reluctant with the title since I hate the TV show FEAR FACTOR but thank God, this was completely the opposite! Totally unexpected. It is a great story so far & I can't want to see what happens next. You have the characters so well written and I hate that detective! He needs his butt kicked! Hurry up & update!!
Author's Response: Hey Jenna! wow, it's been awhile since i see you on chaos! glad to see you posting your stories here :) and thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying it :)
[Report This]Date: 07/02/05 01:27 pm Title: 9
yay!!!! you updated!!!!*jumps around the room* lol. love the clifhanger....poor kev, probably thinks hes crazy now lol.
Author's Response: aww i know, poor Kevin. and im not sure if this good or bad for you, lol...but kevin is in for the bad times more so in the next few chappies as well. hehe...
[Report This]Date: 07/02/05 09:36 am Title: 9
You know I loved this chapter right? And especially the twist you put it at the end. So the bad guy isn't a bad guy but a good guy and the bad guy now wants Kevin's jacket which is at Nick's AHHH mean cliffie! I know Brian and NIck were there joking around! Must update soon must must must! lol Must ;)
Author's Response: lmao mare! i think your nancy drew is in overload for you, lol. We shall see how the next chap turned out yeah?
[Report This]Date: 05/20/05 12:24 am Title: 8
What a great chapter mers! I want more too :) Fantastic story and yes, Nick looks great in read lol
[Report This]Date: 05/19/05 10:32 pm Title: 8
Hehe....forgetful kevy.....at least the truth is out now....i hope they dont get hurt(unless its something like otr hehe)
[Report This]Date: 05/19/05 10:03 pm Title: 1. House Call
LMAO uh....okay we are SO each other's dopplegangers that I just noticed I called you Mare! Sorry about that lol See? I guess Maria's not the only one that gets us confused apparently I do too!
[Report This]Date: 05/19/05 08:07 pm Title: 8
Great chapter Mare! You KNow love this story and really enjoyed the last part. The part about NIck's frowning being as constant as Kevin's eyebrows or someting to that effect? Fabulouso! Must have more NOW! :) the impatient M!
