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Reviewer: mersey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/05 02:51 pm Title: Before Every thing

well damn, that got my attention, no matter how short that was. You need to update this so i can understand what's going on, lol. And that sword sounds mighty find to me. and um, this guy had wings? now THAT i didnt see coming! Update!! :0)

Author's Response: thanks a lot for that great review, glad you liked the first chapter, I hope the second chapter that i will post really will be better then the first, and thanks agian for the great review