Date: 10/28/05 04:28 am Title: Early is on Time
Great start! Can't wait to read more :) Two thumbs waaaaaaaay up! *laughs* Update soon! :)
Date: 10/19/05 08:42 pm Title: Early is on Time
very good so far! one lil thing tho.....maybe it was just me....but when i first saw the graphic, i didnt think the woman was wearing a shirt lmao
Author's Response: Hey Felicia! Thanks for your review! About the graphic, lol, never saw it that way, interesting POV though! It's rated R, but I wouldn'tput a topless woman in the graphic! hihi! Keep reading! Thanks! x Madeline