Date: 07/20/13 09:58 pm Title: 2
Now I've finished the challenge stories, I'm back to carry on reading this one :)
I would've punched that kid too, nasty bully, he deserved it. I hate bullies!
Author's Response:
yay! You're back! LOL I know, Charlie is flat out man, isn't he? Thanks, Steph! :O)
Date: 07/20/13 04:32 pm Title: 2
Poor Nick :( I like that he talked to AJ but something tells me Charlie is gonna get Nick back for hitting.him. Not anything serious but he's a bully. I probably would have hit that kid too!
Author's Response:
Yup, Charlie is definitely the token bully in this story.
Date: 07/06/13 02:17 am Title: 2
Quick segway into the tie-in to the case in the last story! A lot happened in this chapter to set up the plot.. I don't like seeing teenage Nick being bullied :( You see, this is where I have a little bit of a hard time with AU stories. I mean, he's supposed to be followed around all the time by screaming girls, right? Though, I fear that this may have been a little more like his life had be actually been in school. I can't picture AJ as a firefighter. I think it's cool that's the profession he chose, though. Weird, because I can totally see Kevin, Howie, and Brian as cops! I'm wondering if you're going to incorporate AJ's profession into the case somehow, though. I guess we'll see!
Author's Response:
Yeah, that would be totally weird if a band of screaming girls just started randomly following Nick around screaming in this one lol I have a feeling you are right about that though if he had stayed in regular school I think he would get bullied. I had a hard time trying to figure out what profession I wanted AJ to have. I knew another cop would be too much but I wanted him to work in civil service. I did start to buy it myself once I got comfortable with the idea so hopefully you will too. And as far as a tie in, you shall see! :O) Thanks, Emily!
Date: 01/21/06 07:33 am Title: 2
gr8 chapter,
Good on Nick, i would have done it, i hope kevin and his dad will listen to him
keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks :O)
Date: 01/21/06 05:11 am Title: 2
dun dun duuuunn.
I'm dying over here. *sings* Anticipation...
Author's Response: Aww lol now that song will be running through my head too! Thanks :OP
Date: 01/21/06 04:45 am Title: 2
i liked this chapter better cuz it had my name in it lol jk great job with it though
Author's Response: lmao
Date: 01/21/06 03:34 am Title: 2
Amazing chapter! I honestly go the week with your chapters to look forward to. with all my hours now....working 45 a week...I have this to fall back on every other day! lol
Anyways...damn...Nick sure is a troubled child. I hope that he realizes that nobody is at fault for his mothers death but Howie's *lovely* wife. The bitch...and the muerders that are happening...freaky stuff there. Damn. I have a feeling it is only a matter of time before the Richardsons are affected again personally. The question is when and how? Great update. I look forward to next Friday!!!
Author's Response: Yes poor Nicky is a bit on the troubled side but i'd be too I guess lol 45 hours a week sucks! I'm glad I can help :O)
Date: 01/21/06 03:21 am Title: 2
Dude!!!! I thought that John guy got killed in the last fic???? Argh!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Nicky & A.J. are right - that kid DID deserve to be decked!!!!
Author's Response: He did get killed in the last fic. and I agree with you about the kid being decked! lol
Date: 01/21/06 02:45 am Title: 2
awesome chapter. i cant wait for another update!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Alexia :O)
Date: 01/21/06 01:50 am Title: 2
okay, maybe its me pmsing, and other sad stories i was reading today...but im crying!!!! i need more! lol
and yes, tgif!
Author's Response: Aww i'm sorry *hugs* lol
Date: 01/20/06 10:31 pm Title: 2
How is Anita connected??? It really does feel like unfinished business, as everyone that was involved in the first fic is involved still...And that guy was a complete jerk, I'm glad Nick punched him, I would've done the same!!
Author's Response: I would have too! lol