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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/13 05:39 pm Title: 9

wow way to be a tool there daddy Kevin. I felt so bad for Nick once again..Kevin was right, Nick doesn't just need to be disciplined...he wants a dad too. Nick feels nobody understands him but shutting them out isn't helping much either. Loved the emotions in this scene.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Sometimes it's hard to write an angsty male teenager who nobody gets! But yes, it's clear that Kevin Sr. Has no idea how to be a dad. Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: Anita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/06 02:34 pm Title: 9

excellent chapter you really did have me in tears with this one.

Reviewer: Nijntje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/06 05:54 pm Title: 9

Yeah sure.. A nice weekend after you left me with another mean cliffy.. :S

Author's Response: hey, it's my job. lol and I didn't even think it was that mean hehehe

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/06 04:49 pm Title: 9

I just now got a chance to read this. I'm soo glad Brian is ok!!! I just hate it when one of the guys get hurt. and I hope Nick is gonna be ok. I'm glad to see that Nick is starting to open up his heart for his father cause right now is when those two need each other the most. keep up the great work and update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Kim! :O)

Reviewer: felicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/06 02:34 am Title: 9

thank god brian is okay! and please let nicky be okay!!! and yay for nick maybe opening up his love to kev senior a teenie bit, hopefully by the end they are the best of pals...at least as best of pals any normal 15 year old and his father can be hehe.

Author's Response: lol aww very true

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/06 02:01 pm Title: 9

*sigh* Cliffies suck! Why do I have a bad feeling that Nicky is going ti disappear because the people watching him are going to 'kidnap' him while Brian is being discharged? I feel so bad for Kevin Sr...not knowing what to do as a parent and all. He is clueless! And Nick's actually having a heart and opening up his soft side was sweet. :) Badass Nick is more entertaining though! lol. Then again, I love drama and conflict!!! *grins* Probably why I love this story so much...and the To Protect and Serve. Amazing chapter...as always. You never let me down! hehe.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :O) Gotta love badass Nick. lol

Reviewer: A.W. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/06 05:05 am Title: 9

love this story...please update asap!!!!

Author's Response: thanks! :O)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/06 04:37 am Title: 9

AHHH!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!! THEY'RE GONNA ABDUCT NICKY!!!!!!!!! JUST - AHHHH!!!!!!!!! YAY! BRIAN'S OKAY!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~ P.S. You c'n be late updating next week, I won't be home again until Sunday-lol.

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the permission Lenni. See? now if i'm late you guys can blame Lenni! :OP

Reviewer: ALM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/06 11:29 pm Title: 9

I dont not get it to, why do they what Nick so bad and Nick does loves his dad i know it, how old is the dad anyway. so happy that brain is ok :) pls pls Kevin and Nick do not go pls pls dont anyway keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: I haven't really put much thought into how old the dad is. He's probably in his mid fifties or so? And why whoever wants Nick wants him will come out in time :O)

Reviewer: waj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/06 10:50 pm Title: 9

The whole Nick being watched constantly thing is seriously creepy,,,why are they so obsessed by him?

Author's Response: why are we so obsessed with him? lmao