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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/13 10:55 am Title: Chapter 20

Lies. Lies. Lies. Oh, Ariana, you are so consumed of your hatred but then again, you have every right to be angry.

So, Ariana was adopted by Scott and Tyler's family? Did I get it right? And her brothers played along with her plans?

Author's Response: Yes, I think so lol I wish I could remember but it sounds right to me!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/13 06:35 am Title: Chapter 20

Nick wanting to be by his brothers.was very sweet and adorable, but I wish he'd told Kevin about the aconite. I also hate how gullible Howie is, his wife is psychotic. i hope Nick can expose her before she makes him look like the bad guy!!

Author's Response:

She is a looney tunes! So we'll have to wait and see! Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/13 04:02 am Title: Chapter 20

Well, you got me! I definitely didn't see that one coming! I figured this story would loop back to Kevin Sr. and the witness protection thing, but right now, I have no theories. I'm confused. Haha. (btw, I did take note of your not killing Stacey....yet. And touché on the Emily bit. LoL.)

Author's Response:

Wow, you're all the way up to 20! I've been reading ahead of you on this one because I'm thinking of changing it into an OF which is why I have known what you've been talking about as you've been reading, but you have now caught up to me lol Glad you didn't see the half sister twist coming. Now you'll start to see exactly how batshit crazy Ariana really is! I better read the next chapter now. hehe

Reviewer: connie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/07 11:37 am Title: Chapter 20

thank you for explaining why Ariana is acting like this and who she really is:
Ariana Richardson

loved the first story and this sequel is super trouper too ! thanks a lot

Author's Response: Yay thanks Connie!

Reviewer: waj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/06 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 20

OH MY GOD!!! She's their SISTER?????? Kevin Sr had an affair on Jackie?? I can't believe this...Bloody hell. And WHY is Howie so gullible???? I hope Nick will be be ok...damn.

Author's Response: hehehe yup lol

Reviewer: Anita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/06 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 20

wow im a little lost is kevin her real father? and why did he kill her parents?

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/06 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 20

I kinda realized I didnt read this chapter..which kinda sorta helps the chapter I read before this (that actually comes after) make a lot more sense. I mean, damn...its no wonder Ariana is so hostile! I SOMEWHAT feel bad for her cuz of what she went through, but her revenge is sick and twisted! I cant belive she made up such things about Nick. Thats horrible! And Nick is still pretty shaken over the past. Poor little guy. INcredible chapter. One of my favorites so far.

Author's Response: lmao aww good. I'm glad you feel bad for her. I'm trying to give her some depth.

Reviewer: A.W. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/06 03:19 am Title: Chapter 20

Shocking change of events, it's awesome, update when you can please.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try :O)

Reviewer: ALM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/06 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 20

half brothers? WOW did not see that coming

Author's Response: Good :O) lol

Reviewer: Julilly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/06 11:18 am Title: Chapter 20

Oh, the intrigue! lol I'm waiting on baited breath to see what happens next!

Author's Response: aww yay! Thanks Julilly. :O)

Reviewer: Alana Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/06 03:54 am Title: Chapter 20

*shocked* Holy shizzpoop! Wow, now that's some deep stuff. I'm lovin this!

Author's Response: hehehe thanks!

Reviewer: mers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/06 03:19 am Title: Chapter 20

BRILLIANT! AWESOME! EXCELLENT! what a way to shock us readers! now Ariana is their half-sister, go figure! And that was very subtle, telling readers she is older than Howie...it made sense then that she's older than Kevin. Now im curious abt what happened to her mom and why Richardson Sr killed her :D and yay @ making Ariana very 3 dimensional, in some ways, i pity her, but she missed a handful of sessions i bet, she's crraazzzyyy! lol

Author's Response: aww thanks Mers! lol yes I try to be subtle sometimes. :O) and i'm trying to make her as 3 dimensional as you can make any crazy person.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/06 03:00 am Title: Chapter 20

ahhhhh! what a suprise! never ever saw that one! great chapie!!!

Author's Response: YAY! Thanks Kim :O)

Reviewer: ann Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/06 11:06 am Title: Chapter 20

dum dum dum, haha! his three kids? :p yet again you've made such an unexpected twist! fabulous! can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: LOL thanks Ann and yes back then Nicky wasn't born yet so it would have been only three kids. ;O)

Reviewer: Drama_Queens Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/06 03:33 am Title: Chapter 20

ohhh...i didn't see that coming! can't wait for next week...*squeals*

Jenn

Author's Response: YAY! I'm happy to hear that. :O) Thanks Jenn