Date: 08/13/10 06:23 am Title: Chapter 42
Yoot! First off, yay for you for being ahead of schedule :) That makes me happy. This suspense is killing me! This accident is like a whole other worry. I hope that Nick can get out of there safely. And I hope that Ariana is still alive so she can rot in jail. lol.
And I am totally feeling for Howie. Although I can't even imagine how hard it must be to know that your marriage is all a lie and that your wife is a crazy bitch, I can imagine how torn he must feel. Now he just seems angry. I hope he doesn't leave the force. Loved the description that you were making about the guilty by association thing Brian was thinking. Good stuff!
So glad that you're finishing this. Well, not glad it's ending. Just glad that it'll get an ending. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thanks Sel! I can only imagine how hard it would be to go through something like Howie is going through. Poor guy. I guess even he deserves some torturing now and then! lol I'm also glad you mentioned the guilt by association thing. I almost named the chapter that but was afriad it would get lost along the way. :O)
Date: 08/09/10 05:00 am Title: Chapter 41
And so the chase begins huh? Nice, I'm excited. LOL at the fact that you don't even know how many more chapters you might need, but it looks like you're getting a little bit more back into the story, which is cool. Waiting a whole week just might kill me, but I'll be patient. ; ) Thanks Mare!
Author's Response:
LOL Thanks. Yeah, I have no clue. Ariana is keeping me guessing! :O)
Author's Response:
LOL Thanks. Yeah, I have no clue. Ariana is keeping me guessing! :O)
Date: 08/09/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 39
Thankssss! Meens a lot to me to read my name here cause I admire your work too much Mare! And this is great!! Thank you and God Bless you
Author's Response:
Thanks Carlah! You are one of the reasons I started this story up again!
Date: 08/08/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 41
Wow...this chap was scary. I'm so glad that AJ was able to get out the house ok. Now I'm wondering how the hell they're gonna find Arianna and Nick.thanks for updating!
Author's Response:
Thanks Sel! Yeah, thats the tricky part. LOL
Date: 08/08/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 41
Great chapter, love the story
Author's Response:
Thanks Winnie! :O)
Date: 08/08/10 06:32 am Title: Chapter 41
More more more....please?....did I say more yet? Lol, love it! I dont want it to end
Author's Response:
aww thanks! It's nice to know there's still people out there that are reading it. Makes me feel better. :O)
Date: 08/04/10 05:45 am Title: Chapter 40
YAY! I most certainly did NOT forget about these updates :) I've been out of town and am now catching up! I'm so glad they were able to trace the call and I hope they can get there quickly! I love the beginning with AJ being a smartass to Ariana telling her how to start a fire. LOL. It seems so...AJ. The parts with AJ and Nick are sweet and I hope that they'll both be ok in the end. I definitely feel for Howie in all this mess as well. Seems like he's believing the guys now though. Can't wait to see how you wrap this all up although I'll be sad to see it end.
And don't get discouraged!! You're doing such an awesome job and you're so close to the end!! I'm sure you have more readers that just aren't reviewing although I'm not sure WHY people don't review. lol. But either way, I'm loving what you've done with this whole series and I know I'm not the only one. You're an awesome writer...one of my favorites!! Can't wait to see another update :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Sel! I'm feeling much better because of awesome people like yourself. I just needed to have my pity party for one. lol Glad you're liking what you've read and I hope the end won't disappoint you guys!
Date: 08/03/10 12:26 am Title: Chapter 40
YAY they know where they are now, I love the AJ and Nick part of this story too. Really, only one more chapter?? You could extend this as long as you want you know for... suspenseful intrigue, or writing practice, OR for your reader's pure enjoyment of this story and all it's characters... just puttin' that out there. lmao j/k
There is a lot of wrap up left, I mean besides saving the boys, there's all the shit Arianna did to their family, like killing their mom, I mean Nick is still the only one that knows about that. Don't let a lack of feedback discourage you Mare, you're an amazing storyteller with some really creative ideas, and keep in mind that there might be some people just seeing this and starting the series for the first time now, they need to catch up.lol Your writing is truly loved in the fanfic world Mare, so don't get down on yourself, your readers really appreciate your hard work, trust me. ; )
Author's Response:
Yes, literally reader's enjoyment as in one reader, sometimes two if i'm having a good day lol I am so happy you don't want this story to end Sam, but honestly I should have never even started it. I should have ended it with Protect and Serve. No worries, all the loose ends will tie up by the end. I'm still not sure if it'll all end in one chapter. It might be a very long chapter 40 or it will go one more after that. Reguardless, I'll finish the damn thing! I promise! Or you can send Ariana after me! LOL
Thanks for the words of encouragement. You always make me feel better! You're awesome and are seriously one of the reasons I came back to writing at all! So again, I owe you a lot of thanks! I do hope this story gets some new readers. That would be nice :O)
Okay pity party over! lol I did manage to write a little more on it today so hopefully the update will be semi on time! If you haven't noticed, I work best when I force myself to have a schedule.
Date: 08/01/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 39
Uh no, thank you Mare...for FINALLY updating this! Yay!!! I can not even begin to say what I was thinking when I opened the e-mail you sent out. I was like, "Wait it's too early for another update of 'what Lurks' ...wait OMG SCARS???!!!" lmao
One of my biggest pet-peeves is starting a really amazing story and then finding that it's not finished. I know things had changed for you after Kevin left, so I was bummed but totally understood. So again thank you for taking a look at this one again, I know I appreciate. About the chapter, hopefully Howie can finally see what is actually going on, hopefully AJ won't go up in flames, and Kevin gets away to help Patty. But that leaves one thing, Where oh where is Nicky? hmmm.
Author's Response:
Thanks Sam. :O) I really did want to finish this up because i'm like you! I hate when people leave things unfinished. I have another chapter ready to go for tomorrow and then I think there will only be one more final one after that. Again, thanks for not quitting on this story like so many people have!
Date: 07/29/10 12:08 am Title: Chapter 39
Yay Mare!! *big hugs* I love this series and it makes me so happy that you're working on it again! I'm glad that they figured out who it was...poor Howie :(. And I hope that when Howie calls her, they can trace her. Thanks so much for updating :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it. I'm sure I lost a lot of readers on this one, thanks for sticking with it Sel! :O)
Date: 07/26/10 07:39 am Title: Chapter 17
Great as always ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 07/21/10 06:59 am Title: 14
This is going soooo good! I love the way Kevin and all the big brothers are so carefully and lovely with Nick :) . And since it's in Nicks pov, belive me I'm been a fan since 14 years ago and you REALLY know the kid, I read and it's just like him talking! COngrats
Author's Response:
thanks Carlah! Funny that you are reviewing this one because a new chapter is coming on Wednesday! :O)
Date: 07/19/09 04:21 am Title: Chapter 37
Sooooo...A Million Little Things is done, got some free time on your hands in the writing department...any word on chapter 38?? *hint, hint, wink, wink, nudge, nudge* lol
Author's Response: hrmmm lol When I saw the email for this review I thought I was reading it wrong. I promise i'll get to it sometime soon-ish? Does that work?
Date: 03/20/09 03:01 am Title: 1
I love this story! I check back often to see if it's been updated! Do you plan on finishing it soon? The suspense is killing me! Love your writings!
Author's Response: aww thanks! I will try to update it soon-ish. :O) Thanks for reading!!
Date: 03/05/09 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 37
Omg. how can I forget this story?? So glad to see that you updated...And can't wait to see how everything will end. Plz update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks Waj. I'll try to get to it soon.
