Date: 07/21/13 09:25 pm Title: 4
Yes, I agree with Howie about those kids turning into armed robbers or drug dealers. I hate those types of kids! And his wife is a bitch, seems Nick senses that too.
Author's Response:
Me too! I hate when kids are nothing but mean spirited bullies! We'll have to see if that's what they really are or not! Thanks, Steph!
Date: 07/21/13 02:49 pm Title: 12
Poor Nick....he still isn't catching a break is he? I think he should have told Kevin it was Charlie....he is gonna end up learning the hard way running and hiding doesn't solve anything. Ariana.....I'm just shaking my head at her lol
Author's Response:
He's got that whole typical stubbourn teenager thing going on! And yes, I shake me head at Ariana too! LOL
Date: 07/21/13 02:41 pm Title: 11
Charlie is such an ass. he's Nadia's brother....interesting. Lots of interesting stuff in this chapter.
Author's Response:
Yup! They are brther and sister. Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/20/13 09:58 pm Title: 2
Now I've finished the challenge stories, I'm back to carry on reading this one :)
I would've punched that kid too, nasty bully, he deserved it. I hate bullies!
Author's Response:
yay! You're back! LOL I know, Charlie is flat out man, isn't he? Thanks, Steph! :O)
Date: 07/20/13 05:49 pm Title: 10
I knew as I was reading that that guy wasn't really asking Nick to help him....I wanted to shake him so bad for doing that. Ariana probably was the one who told Luis the FBI would look after him, and obviously she just killed Nadia. crazy bitch strikes again!!
Author's Response:
She is pretty crazy huh? LOL thanks, Tracy! Glad to see you're enjoying this one! :O)
Date: 07/20/13 05:39 pm Title: 9
wow way to be a tool there daddy Kevin. I felt so bad for Nick once again..Kevin was right, Nick doesn't just need to be disciplined...he wants a dad too. Nick feels nobody understands him but shutting them out isn't helping much either. Loved the emotions in this scene.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Sometimes it's hard to write an angsty male teenager who nobody gets! But yes, it's clear that Kevin Sr. Has no idea how to be a dad. Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/20/13 05:31 pm Title: 8
I really think Charlie doesn't realize what he's getting involved in. sheesh this is getting really intense already, love it Mare!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! :O)
Date: 07/20/13 05:20 pm Title: 7
I think Patty being back in Nick's life is good for him. I feel like as Nick grew up he got closer to AJ and that's why he isn't so close to Kevin anymore, maybe all that he was through had something to do with it. Poor kid :(
Author's Response:
Yes, you are correct! Nick and AJ developed a very special bond because of what happened to them but he still loves Kevin too, just seems angry at him all the time! :O( poor little guy! Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/20/13 05:02 pm Title: 6
Charlie is an ass. Poor Nick.....and something tells me Anita was lying too, cause when she answered the door she was acting kind of funny. I also don't think that camping trip will end well
Author's Response:
We shall see! ;)
Date: 07/20/13 04:53 pm Title: 5
Nick is so vastly different but he's been through a lot and AJ is right, he needs to stop running away from things. Although running far far away from Ariana seems to be a good idea LOL
Author's Response:
Yeah, seriously! The farther he runs away from her crazy ass the better! LOL
Date: 07/20/13 04:46 pm Title: 4
I glad Nick tried to stick up for himself and Howie got his skateboard back but I hate how fake Ariana is....the fact she is clearly nuts is totally left field and I hope Howie isn't this dumb...
Author's Response:
Well, he's in love and she'sa good actress. I mean before I told you how crazy she was, did you have any clue? LOL
Date: 07/20/13 04:40 pm Title: 3
I think all the boys aren't really liking their dad being around, or maybe it's just Nick and Kevin because I am picking up on the fact Kevin didn't really believe his dad was going to handle Nick. looks like Nick is about to get into more trouble...
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think it's a hard adustment for them all but especially Nick since he now has to love witha stranger who he blames for his mom's death. Nick always find a way to get himself into trouble! Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 07/20/13 04:32 pm Title: 2
Poor Nick :( I like that he talked to AJ but something tells me Charlie is gonna get Nick back for hitting.him. Not anything serious but he's a bully. I probably would have hit that kid too!
Author's Response:
Yup, Charlie is definitely the token bully in this story.
Date: 07/19/13 10:50 am Title: 1
I liked this little reintroduction of all the characters, but Nick made me sad :( I also do not like that Ariana married Howie....that crazy bitch!!!
Author's Response:
Poor Mersey! When most people insert one of their best friend's into something they make them be all cute. I make mine a psychopath! LOL
Date: 07/17/13 02:47 am Title: Chapter 44
I actually did mean to mention how happy I was that they all had living wives/girlfriends at the end! That was in the original review in my head that got intercepted by the little guy! (he intercepts a lot of thoughts these daya...lol) I also meant to tell you that had there not been a little manifesto in between chapters 36 and 37, and if there were no dates on the stories showing when they stard and ended, I'd never know that you took such a long break from it. I really didn't see much of a change in your writing, other than the fact that you got a little trigger happy (pun intended) to get to the end. I'd love to get a chance to read the OF one of these days!
Author's Response:
LOL I was so surprised you didn't mention that! Good to know there was no interuption in the flow and if I ever finish them I'll send them your way. (the OF versions)
