Date: 03/16/06 11:42 pm Title: On The Set
hey mary OMG your story fricken rocks i luv it and i hope that you keep writing in this one more and i know for a fact this is a great story and I hope to read more of it when you write more in it ok luv ya mary ~Leslie~
Date: 03/16/06 03:49 pm Title: On The Set Pt. 5
Hey Mary, Your story was so good. I just kept reading until there wasnt anymore stories. You should totally write more stories.
Date: 03/16/06 07:33 am Title: On The Set Pt. 5
its a really good start....but it needs something more.....there is too much conversation and not enough characterization. More deceloping of the characters as well. But again not a bad start to a good story. Believe me it took me almost 8 years to write like I do now. Some of my first fan fics werent the greatest, but you only get better with time :)