[Report This]Date: 08/10/06 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 15
WoW!!! Very Well Writen..Love this story..You have made me come to tears very nice chapter
Author's Response: thankx... ;)... I spent a lot of time brainstorming to write this chapter...
[Report This]Date: 08/02/06 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ooo Love it...very good chapter...Cant wait for more..and I hope both Nick gets better
[Report This]Date: 08/02/06 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
aah, poor Nick. I can imagine him in my head =).
[Report This]Date: 07/29/06 07:12 am Title: Chapter 13
Ok, yeah, looked up the fife on google, it's nice. I play the tin whistle, which looks kind of like a recorder except it's metallic (except for the fipple, or mouthpiece, which is made of plastic) and only has 6 holes. It's pretty cool =D.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/06 02:19 am Title: Chapter 13
girl you had me on the edge of my seat very good chapter..cant wait for more updates :)
Date: 07/28/06 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hm, I've never heard of a "fife", does it really exist?
Oh, and congratulations for being nominated for some stuff. Wish someone thought my stuff was good enough to be nominated...
Whatever. I wonder who the girl is...
Anyway, update!
p.s. You've double posted this chapter.
Author's Response: A fife is actually a kind of 'flute' that was popular in the 18th century (or somewhere near that). Some people learn how to play the fife before actually playing the real flute. (I know what a fife is since I own one... lol).
[Report This]Date: 07/25/06 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ooo can not wait for me very good
[Report This]Date: 07/25/06 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 12
Nick hugged Brian tightly as tears of hope glistened in his eyes.
^^, that's a sweet line =).
Author's Response: thankx...
[Report This]Date: 07/23/06 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
Geez leave me hanging..Please update :D Awesome Chapter by the way :D
Author's Response: Thankx... I might post the next chapter this week...
Author's Response: I'm actually excited to see how the story turns up... ;)..
[Report This]Date: 07/19/06 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
Poor Nicky....this sucks...dont make him die please
[Report This]Date: 07/07/06 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ok, I've looked it up:
Fevers over 104?F are potentially fatal...
Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive remark... I'll try to look it up again...
[Report This]Date: 07/07/06 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
WoW awesome update..but I hope everything is okay with Nick Love the story
Author's Response: well, thankx again...;D
[Report This]Date: 07/07/06 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
Sorry, backstreet_fanatic, but 110 degrees? That's ridiculous, he'd be dead!!!
And lol, you did the amnesia insomnia thing again.
Otherwise good, don't get discouraged. It's all CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM... :D (please don't hate me)
Author's Response: I've actually researched on beforehand. Yup, 110 degrees Fahrenheit (up), or 43 degrees Centigrade can prove fatal, but I know some people who survived w/ a fever that high.
[Report This]Date: 07/07/06 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
That was unexpected lol.....great job I cannot wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: ;)..."..."
[Report This]Date: 07/06/06 06:55 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow!!! I love this so far...it just keeps getting interesting I love it! I cannot wait for more.
Author's Response: thankx...XD
