[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 15
excellet chapter
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 14
nice chapter
Author's Response: thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
nice chapter just wanted to mention to read through what your write and check spelling and grammar
Author's Response: thank you so much for that suggestion! i'll be more careful in the future!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
not a bad chapter keep it up
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
Im happy that aj told jade off. i used to like her until these last couple of chapters, now i dont really
Author's Response: thanks for your honesty, lol.
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
good chapter and i understand her getting mad but i think she over reacted too dramatic
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 9
great job
Author's Response: thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
love jade shes awesome
Author's Response: I really loved creating Jade and writing her story. thank you for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh nice ending to the chapter
Author's Response: thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
loved the chapter once again great story
Author's Response: thank you so much! i really appreciate you reading this story!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh nice chapter. love the name fish bones lol
Author's Response: haha, i couldn't think of anything else ... so i just thought of that for some reason, lol
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
great chapter really liked it
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
great chapter loved it
Author's Response: thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
nice job with this chapter also
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/06 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
nice beginning i really liked it
Author's Response: thank you!
