[Report This]Date: 06/22/06 11:19 am Title: Into the Department of Mysteries
aww this just makes me miss OOTP, i want the movie out NOW! lol...my fav line is this : "Oh look! Aquavirius maggots!" Luna exclaimed excitedly. "My dad was talking about the Ministry breeding them!"...that is such a Luna thing to say! if i were to choose between these 2, i'd go for the first one though, only cause the first one is completely original and not taken from an event that happened in the books, therefore readers only have to judge your writing and see it as an original while this 2nd one, readers will tend to compare to what they remember reading in the books and JK is one tough competition to beat, lol.
Author's Response: Oh thanks so much for reviewing! Yeah I liked my first one better too because of the original idea but my friend wanted me to write the luna side of the book and it was hard cuz im not as good as JKR and I changed a bit from the book because I didn't want to copy out of a book but thanks again for the review and i know Im eagar for the movie out too. Its my fav book
Author's Response: Oh thanks so much for reviewing! Yeah I liked my first one better too because of the original idea but my friend wanted me to write the luna side of the book and it was hard cuz im not as good as JKR and I changed a bit from the book because I didn't want to copy out of a book but thanks again for the review and i know Im eagar for the movie out too. Its my fav book
[Report This]Date: 06/22/06 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
aww me likes it :D that is just like Ron to say those things without thinking, lmao...and you portrayed Luna nicely i thought. what i really love though is that you said just about enough and each paragraph isnt filled with too much description so when i read it, it all move smoothly for me. I love a good, smooth ride, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for this review it means a lot to me because I was really scared that I hadn't done a good enough Luna personality so it means a lot that a reader thinks i did good. Im also very glad that it was a smooth read for you i tried my best. thanks again for the review *hugs*
