Date: 10/23/11 08:43 am Title: Epilogue
Awwww. Love a happy ending....sad Kevin left but glad Nick made a friend that understands him. I really enjoyed this story and it took me almost 3 or 4 hours to read the whole thing. I am glad I decided to, it was well written (as is all of your work) and I loved the realness of everything. It was like reading a real book. Great story :)
Author's Response:
Wow Tracy, I don't know what to say. First of all kudos to you for reading this entire story in one sitting on your phone none the less! I know the chapters in this one are a lot longer than I write them nowadays. I loved readng your thoughts as you were going chapter by chapter but what I loved even more was you picked up on all the things I wanted my readers to pick up on as you went along. The fact that there was something suspicious about the cops and how Nick felt a connection to Belle. Also glad you enjoyed all the humor when it came to AJ. I needed him to break up the more serious chapters. Howie as well once he came in. Your reviews meant so much to me and it made me remember how it was for me when I first posted this story. At the time I was so jaded by fanfic and was ready to move on. I struggled so much writing this one and I realize now if I had someone like you cheering me on as I was writing this, I probably wouldn't have taken those 2 years off. Thanks again! I always love when you pick up and read an older story of mine! :O)
Date: 10/23/11 08:39 am Title: Chapter 25
I am so glad Nick is going to talk to Bella. Great climax with all the drama :)
Date: 10/23/11 08:34 am Title: Chapter 24
I KNEW something was fishy about that cop! Now it is all making sense...wow. Lots of info in this chapter!
Date: 10/23/11 08:29 am Title: Chapter 23
Poor Nick :( I can't imagine how hard all this must be but as if it can't get any worse now there is someone with a gun....damn...
Date: 10/23/11 08:23 am Title: Chapter 22
:O you killed me with that last line. And I figured Tommy had killed himself but wow their story is so sad.
Date: 10/23/11 08:15 am Title: Chapter 21
LOL at Nick trying to get info out of Kevin and :( about Kristin and the miscarriages. So sad. hope they get out of this soon!
Date: 10/23/11 08:07 am Title: Chapter 20
OMFG! Its the cop isn't it????? This is crazy! It is so creepy how Tommy and Nick have the same birthday and look the same...I gotta go to the next chapter!
Date: 10/23/11 07:48 am Title: Chapter 19
I sincerely think Nick is right about Tommy but hopefullly he is right. Howie amused me in this chapter and I can't wait to find out what is the connection with the stairs!
Date: 10/23/11 07:10 am Title: Chapter 18
Holy crap, that was weird! I wonder what is up with that policewoman. I also hope Nick gets that notebook back and figures out what is in it....glad Kevin is watching him and lmao at AJ and Howie.
Date: 10/23/11 07:00 am Title: Chapter 17
Uh oh. Creepy police lady following them....sounds like trouble!
Date: 10/23/11 06:46 am Title: Chapter 16
I like Kevin's idea to throw off the people who broke into the house. Hopefully it works...and I loved the Kevin and AJ banter yet again in this chapter....I was laughing.
Date: 10/23/11 06:32 am Title: Chapter 15
Belle's story is so similar to nick's....no wonder he wants to know more. this is such a good mystery story....I feel like I am reading a real book. Loving it!
Date: 10/23/11 06:20 am Title: Chapter 14
Ohhhh Nick always winds up in the hot seat! Kevin is right, if he keeps acting jittery he is gonna look suspicious.
Date: 10/23/11 06:16 am Title: Chapter 13
Something is definitely up with those cops, I really think Nick is right about them. I like how AJ is being somewhat helpful to Nick too. Hoping Nick doesn't run into more trouble now....
Date: 10/23/11 05:50 am Title: Chapter 12
The plot thickens. I do not trust that officer Parker...something did not vibe well with me on her. As for the diary I bet Nick will get it back....angsty Nick makes me sad and parental Nick makes me fuzzy lol I'm conflicted. Reading on.
