Date: 10/23/11 05:40 am Title: Chapter 11
You and your cliffies. So there's a guy named Parker and they were looking for something....oh snap, nickys in trouble!
Date: 10/23/11 05:22 am Title: Chapter 10
Well at least Nick found some clues, but who the hell is breaking in? And I find Nick being emotionally connected with the girl somehow....like she is very similar to him and he wants to make that connection. Love this chapter
Date: 10/23/11 05:11 am Title: Chapter 9
I love how they keep trying to distract Kevin. I also love how you keep up Nick's obsession with this bear and his paranoia settling in as he goes to the house. I am so curious now to read more :)
Date: 10/23/11 04:59 am Title: Chapter 8
Nick's having visions or dreams of the girl? Very nice. I love AJ in this story, he's very funny. As for the attic, not sure what could be waiting for Nick up there but I will wait to see. For Kevin....I kind of have a feeling about him but again I will wait. Awesome chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy! I think i'm going to just give you a nice long response at the end so this way I don't fill your inbox with Thanks, Tracys lol
Date: 10/23/11 04:46 am Title: Chapter 7
Only Nick gets stabbed by a Teddy bear lmao. I love Kevin flipping out when he saw Nick bleeding. I bet there is something about that sketchpad, hence the title lol. Loving this :)
Author's Response:
Wow! I woke up to 29 emails about reviews from AC lol That hasn't happened in a really long time! I love Chub Chub! lol
Date: 10/23/11 04:29 am Title: Chapter 6
wow that was creepy, and AJ had me laughing with the whole tough guy stuff. Very cute. Wondering what will happen now that Nick is alone in the house?
Author's Response:
Oh the Nick alone chapter is next. LOL I think that might have been one of my favorite ones.
Date: 10/23/11 04:16 am Title: Chapter 5
I love Nick and AJ banter lmao. Loving the suspense building up in the basement and that door slamming plus lights off would freak me out too! Reading on
Author's Response:
OKay I think I remember this chapter lol AJ was extra wussy I think? Not sure if they hit the secret room yet. Or Chub Chub? lmao
Date: 10/23/11 03:55 am Title: Chapter 4
:( the first part of this chapter made me so sad. I can totally understand what Nick is thinking but it is kind of good he has this mystery to distract him. he always thinks that people don't want to be around him but he needs to let them in. Kevin is trying. Great chapter....reading on!
Author's Response:
Aww as always I want to almost read this along with you because it's been so long I can't really remember what's going on. LOL I do vaguely remember Nick being very angsty in this one. Thanks Tracy! You're giving me warm fuzzies!
Date: 10/23/11 03:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Hmmmm looks like some pieces are coming together. LMAO at the Bob Villa crack. My parents used to watch him a lot. Loving this so far :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy! LOL
Date: 10/23/11 03:13 am Title: Chapter 2
Just started reading this and it is very interesting so far, I am looking forward to seeing what happens next, the story of Tommy is very intriguing.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy! It's been a really long time since i've gotten any reviews for this one lol I remember struggling through the writing process with this and i'm pretty sure it's the last one I wrote before taking my extended break. :O) Hope you enjoy it!
Date: 01/04/11 04:18 am Title: Epilogue
I looooove it!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks! LOL
Date: 11/25/10 08:19 pm Title: Epilogue
I really really enjoyed this story Mare. I'm glad Nick finally got to meet Belle and get everything off his chest too. Even though Kev did leave, I like how they moved on and didn't see it as a negative thing.
Well done!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading this one Steph! :O)
Date: 11/24/10 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ah, the logical Howie! That woman is a nutter though, running them off the road like that :(
Author's Response: I loved writing that scene with Nick picking up Howie at the airport and Howie being all have yo all gone crazy? LOL Thanks Steph!
Date: 11/24/10 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 17
Aw, AJ is such a big wuss, you just have to love him, lol. And Nick is a proper little Sherlock Holmes!
I wonder what the policewoman wants though?
Date: 11/24/10 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 14
Got to love AJ in this! But I wonder what the police want with Nick? And what's in the diary that is so important?
