Date: 05/30/08 02:38 am Title: Chapter 22
I agree with AJ "holy ape shit" you have one twisted mind...and I love it. CONFUSED!!
Author's Response: LOL thanks, I think?
Date: 05/30/08 12:08 am Title: Epilogue
Aww, that was sweet at the end, finally getting the chance to meet Belle. I also enjoyed the twist with the whole "burn down the house or we kill you all" thing. LMAO at the Leighanne reference and Howie, "Actually they do this all the time." lol
Well pat yourself on the back Mare because you pulled off another amazing story that is well loved. It was a great story with a creative idea. Now, don't get mad at me but...does this mean you might start working on Scars...maybe? I'm getting excited just thinking about it. lmao
I can see you rolling your eyes at my nerdiness. lmao
Author's Response:
Thanks Sam lol i'm glad you liked Howie's line. I laughed when I wrote that one. And yes, I am actually going to try to finish up Scars now. NOt sure when it'll happen but just like this one, it'll happen. thanks for always sticking by me and givine me so much love! You rock!
Date: 05/29/08 02:58 am Title: Chapter 18
you know this thing is so mysterious , but I love how it has tons of humor too. Aw Kevin so protective!
Author's Response: Thanks! :O)
Date: 05/29/08 02:22 am Title: Chapter 17
oh no poor Howie is in for a treat!! I love how the guys bicker at each other it cracks me up.
Author's Response: Thanks! lol I love writing the bickering as well.
Date: 05/29/08 01:53 am Title: Chapter 16
OMG you had me crackin up with the cucumber comment by Nick. then AJ being such a chicken was to funny!! great chapter
Author's Response: Aww it's been so long that I don't have a clue what cucumber comment you're talking about lol I guess tat'll be my excuse for having to check the stry out for myself.
Date: 05/28/08 04:13 pm Title: prologue
I really loved this story and am sad to see it end. Great ending!! It had me lol a lot. Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :O)
Date: 05/28/08 02:18 pm Title: Epilogue
Awesome ending...but I am sad the story is over. It sounds like Nick really did find a friend for life....and they all got to live. YAY! lol. I like how in the end, Nick ended up okay with everything...or maybe content is the right words? Anyways...could not have ended more perfectly!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the reviews! :O)
Date: 05/28/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 25
I totally thought Parker was going to blow their brains out...wow. So sweet and awesome how he took Nick to Belle and she was accepting. I could see them being close once they started talking.
Author's Response: Aww like I would let Parker blow anyone's brains out. When do I ever kill the boys? lol I only slightly maime them.
Date: 05/28/08 11:28 am Title: Epilogue
Man... I can't believe this is over with already. *cries a river* :( It's funny how I'll sit here and push you to finish it, and when it's actually finish, I'll sit here and pout on how it's already done, lol. You did it yet again Mare, another story to add to your infamous collection of great stories!! Thanks for it all... I guess I can push you to update "Scars Run Deep And Wide" now, MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! =]
Author's Response: Thanks Reb and yes because for that one I will need LOT'S of pushing. I can barely even remember where I was with that one. lol thanks for reading!
Date: 05/28/08 11:26 am Title: Chapter 25
Okay, I totally and completely LMFAO at this part.
“Please, just let us go, we won’t say anything.” Kevin said in his sickly calming voice. Everyone who knows Kevin knows it’s an act and beneath that calm voice lays the man who will beat the holy crap out of you once he tricks you into thinking he’s perfectly fine with what’s going on at the moment. Believe me; I have been tricked by that voice many times."
I may not know Kevin personally, but I saw this play out so freaking well!! LMAO. Great job Mare!!
Date: 05/28/08 04:25 am Title: Epilogue
Wow, Mare! Yet another awesomely awesome story from you! I have to admit, in the first 15 chapters, I had no idea where you were going with the story, but by the time I got to the end, I realized one thing: you are a genius! The whole Belle story was so intricately woven and well done, and I'm just more impressed (as usual) by it all! I know I should probably write more and pick and choose exact parts of the story that made me giggle or made me go *jaw drop* but I've just read over half the story in one sitting and I don't remember every single one lol Anyway, awesome story, and please don't stop writing? Please?
Author's Response: LOL Thanks Sarah. yup, that seems to be the general consensus. No one had a clue where I was going sometimes including me. Thanks for reading so much of it in one pop. I don't think I would have been able to do that with this one.
Date: 05/28/08 03:14 am Title: Epilogue
I will always love Chub Chub....I think next time I go to Build-A-Bear I'm going to name him/her Chub Cub hehe. :D
Author's Response: Aww Chub Chub would feel honored! Just make sure you don't put a knife in yours lol
Date: 05/28/08 02:28 am Title: Epilogue
this story was amazing.....great ending! you are fabulous!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! :O)
Date: 05/22/08 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 24
wow......this is amazing! You are an incredible story teller! The mystery of Belle was mind boggling! Nice work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying that! I'm so happy to know you enjoyed the story!
Date: 05/20/08 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
a mystery......I have to keep reading, I just gotta know what nick finds out!!!!
