Date: 05/20/08 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
this house....I picture the house that Noah bought in The Notebook. This story is really interesting!
Date: 05/20/08 02:17 pm Title: prologue
wow! I love the porcelain mask metaphor....very intriguing! You've done a great job of getting the readers attention!
Date: 05/04/08 02:40 am Title: Chapter 24
wow oh wow i can not believe how awesome this chapter was mare excellent job please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks Anita! I hope all is well with you!
Date: 05/04/08 02:33 am Title: Chapter 23
sorry ive been gone mare but i've been sick anyway excellent chapter and crazy ass cliff hanger. off to read the next chapter
Date: 04/29/08 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter Mare! (But then again, I haven't read a bad one written by you..) Great climax!
Author's Response: Aww thanks! That was sweet!
Date: 04/28/08 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 24
Now it's coming together and making sense, lol. I love the way you portrayed Nick in this story... him correcting Tommy (when Tommy said that he was gonna shoot him in the leg, yet was aiming the gun at Nick's chest) reminds us that he is NOT AS DUMB as we all make him out to be, lol. Thanks for updating this Mare, and I'm really sad that this story is nearing it's end already. =[ But can't wait for the ending!! =]
Author's Response: Aww thanks Reb. I'm glad it's making sense to you lol I hope it was before this chapter as well. And yes, Nick is not as dumb as everyone thinks!
Date: 04/28/08 05:06 am Title: Chapter 24
OHHHHHH very intriguing!!!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks Moppy!
Date: 04/28/08 01:19 am Title: Chapter 24
Wow....all I can say is WOW. So much revealed in this chapter. Tommy/Parker breaking in makes SO much sense now. I mean. I can undertand, and at least Nick understands too and is helping him. I am very sad that this story is about to end though. Cant wait to read the last chapter though. Awesome job!!!
Author's Response: Aww just catching up on the reviews. I can't believe I let so much time go by before responding. I have royally been sucking when it comes to everything about this story. lol Anyway I am glad you enjoyed the Tommy/Parker thing. I was afriad that would be too farfetched. :O)
Date: 04/27/08 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 24
oooo this is good. so weird that its coming to an end, but i cant wait till its all resolved :) loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks felikia! I know, I feel like I have been writing on this thing forever!
Date: 04/12/08 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 23
Dear god don't leave this cliff hanger for long, pleassssssse!!! I read this story in less than two days...I'm completely hooked!! I love your stories Mare, you are one of my fav ff writers..Please update soon!!! I'm loving this!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much for saying that. I really did try not to leave you guys hanging for too long this go round and since i'm almost done I promise you won't have to wait that long for the last chapter!
Date: 04/03/08 05:07 am Title: Chapter 23
Wow! What an amazing chapter...I wonder what's gonna happen next!! Funny, I can't picture "Emo Nick." HAHA. Can't wait to read an update =)
Author's Response: Aww thanks!
Date: 04/03/08 03:33 am Title: Chapter 23
Awww man!!!! You are so close, PLEEASE update soon Mare, at least a little sooner than last time...pretty please? Made my day to see that you updated.
Anyway, it took me a minute to realize what had just happened at the end, but when I did I freaked. I think I know who it is, like who the cop is, but we'll see...I also like the the whole santa description for that first line, it was a good visualizer. lmao
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Yay thanks Sam! I really will try to update before the end of this month. I'm giving myself a deadline.
Date: 04/03/08 02:37 am Title: Chapter 23
Damnit Mare!! Lol. You can't leave it off like this, not like this!! Man, I sooo hope you post another chapter like real soon!! It's getting more and more interesting!! The guys are all probably tied up and gagged, AJ trying his hardest to spit out profanity through the cloth shoved in his mouth. Speaking of which, I completely LMAO on AJ's sentence; " I don’t enjoy peril Nick. It doesn’t match my nail polish.” Man, great update hun!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: heehee thanks. I think that was one of my favorite lines in there. I will try to get the next chapter out before the end of this month :O)
Date: 04/03/08 02:33 am Title: Chapter 23
oye! which one is it?! ahhh! *Tackles you* yay for updates (im very sleepy right now haha). loved it!
Author's Response: LOL thanks! WAKE UP!!! ;O)
Date: 04/03/08 02:25 am Title: prologue
A FREAKING UPDATE!! *throws a party* Haha... and you should know by now that I just came here to post a review, now I'll be making my way over to the chapter.
Author's Response: lmao I love when you review before reading.
