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Reviewer: mander Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/06 12:24 am Title: Chapter 6

Hey Sweetie =)
I really like where the story is going and stuff I cant wait to read more. But just a little sugestion maybe you could write with a little more imagery! like kind of say what they were wearing and how they looked at eachother to get more of a sense of a picture. Ex: They were sitting eating breakfast with eachother after another fight about him going on tour and leaving her behind. The rain outside fit their moods exhausted, tired. anything you name it.

I really would love to read more either way though!!

Keep up the great work!

luv ya lots,
oxoxoxoxooxo
~*manda*

Reviewer: Tscarpulla21 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/06 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

Love the story! Keep writing!