Date: 09/17/07 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 08/07/06 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job! I think I had the same kinda look on my face as AJ did lol.. And the ending.. aww so sad.. but leave it up to you to bring back a smile to my face ( >> I think I?m going to design banana outfits for children and brand them the Tooot collection )
Date: 08/03/06 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
AMAZING! But then all your short stories are amazing. I loved this one. I was laughing so hard but at the same time I was feeling so sad reading it because you managed to capture all those feelings and mixed them perfectly with Nick's toughts...what can I say... I really don't think there's a simple way to express what I felt reading it. Amazing story indeed. Great job! :)
Date: 08/02/06 11:07 am Title: Chapter 1
You know I thought this story was brilliant and still do! No one can capture Nick's inner most thoughts as well as you do. You had me bursting out laughing with the anger bin lol and then I loved the serious change at the end. What I love the most about your short fics is that you always leave them as if it's just fading away. There might be more, there might not be, but in this case it's the forboding feeling of change that was just perfect.
congrats and well done!
~ Marfelopogous ;O)