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Reviewer: Babyg Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/08 03:55 am Title: Chapter 5: Patience Is A Virtue

ohhh you have to update this!!

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/07 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 5: Patience Is A Virtue

Haha... Again, I love Nick and Aaron together. And EW, not like that, so don't even think of it! Gross. They're just hilarious back and forth.

Ummm last chapter? So I'm left wondering if they ever do the deed. lol. Anyway, it was good! :D

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/07 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 4: Cold Showers

Aaron’s hands slipped down Kellie’s arms to snake around her waist as they continued to kiss, the movie on the television screen forgotten as they feverishly kissed and touched. He moved his fingers around to the small of her back slipping just under the silky fabric of her camisole. He grinned as he felt her sigh against him, he knew exactly what he was doing to her, her pulse was going a mile a minute, her skin was on fire just a few more moments and he’d have her exactly where he’d…
“I think we should stop for tonight…” She said breaking the kiss.

And then I burst out laughing. LOL. Why do I love torture so? lol.

Anyway... Great chapter! Poor horny Aaron. lol. I'm just kidding. That boy needs to learn to wait! Those Carters and those sexual escapades. lol.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/07 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Hollywood Knights

LOL... This was the best:
Aaron rolled his eyes, “I haven’t slept with her….yet…”
Nick gave him a look then felt his forehead, “Okay you don’t have a fever…..hmmm maybe it’s a nervous breakdown.”
Aaron swatted at Nick and punched his shoulder, “Asshole…no I really like her…”

I think I could read a whole story of Nick and Aaron. It could be called "The Chronicles of Nick and Aaron." Or something like that. I'm not set on that title and I'm open to suggestions.

I'm glad Aaron acknowledged the fact that Nick had just gotten back to town and that they shouldn't call yet because he and Alyssa might be making up. Little things like that do make Aaron likable. (When I didn't think it was possible... lol.)

The ending is so foreboding of something bad happening. Like, I know from reading the other story that they break up, but yeah. It's like dun, dun, DUNNNN.

Great job, though. I like this cause it's still so you in the writing, but it's a different couple and it's lighter than AS right now. :D

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/07 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: Happy New Years

Aaron and his impish grinning... lol. Haha, I'm a lot like Kellie. Like, I THOUGHT I could relate to Alyssa, but maybe more so Kellie... I'm majorly OCD! And I totally lay my clothes out the night before. Haha. Anyway, good chapter. I love getting to know Kellie more. Aaron... Well, it's Aaron. But yeah. And Nick's a dumbass... It's funny to read it from this point of view.

Oh! And good girl, Kellie, for making him wait!! lol. :D

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Date

Kellie laughed at his remark, “I live to eat, I don’t just eat to live.”


“That’s an awesome way to live life.”

Hehe... I like that. I'm the type of girl that can never decide what to get at a restaurant, so I get the sampler ALL the time. haha.

Another great chapter! It's nice to see Aaron wasn't a jerk and didn't push for more than a kiss... I kinda expected that. lol.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 03:16 pm Title: Prologue: Pick Up Lines

Haha, okay, so this morning, I wake up and I'm totally stuck with writing my own stuff and I can't for the life of me get that Nick character description going yet, so I decided I had to start KDL. :D

Aaron sighed in relief; he really, really hated being compared to his brother. On one hand it was a compliment since Nick was a star and a good guy but on the other it was like a slap in the face as if to say ‘hey we can’t tell you apart from your sibling so you have no identity’. And that was the part that hurt the most, like he had no individuality aside from his famous sibling. “Thanks most people compare me to…”

I think that right there explains why Aaron does most of what he's doing.

I think this story will also help me understand Aaron and Kellie more. And understanding Kellie is gonna help me in that scene... ;-) Haha.

A spin-off is a great idea... Again, showing that you know ALL of your characters pretty damn well to be able to do a story that's not even focused on Nick and Ali. Sooo great job!! :D

Reviewer: xKiKix Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/18/07 01:12 am Title: Chapter 5: Patience Is A Virtue

awww... aaron finally got it through his head... YAY!!!! cant wait for more...

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/07 06:36 am Title: Chapter 5: Patience Is A Virtue

LOL Aaron, you got some issues dude!!!
Poor bugger's prolly got a hairy palm now and blue balls and he's hung up on the whole 3some and Nick gets everything before him.

Hello Aaron it's called being the youngest!!! lol

I hope Aaron can talk it out with Kellie and not blow it!!!

Great chapter Teri hope u update soon :D

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/07 05:52 am Title: Chapter 4: Cold Showers

OMG poor Lori, that Basketball guy is an ass!!!

I so thought they were gonna get it on!!! LOL no wonder the title is called Cold Showers :D

Great update Teri, now I gotta find your other update!!!

Reviewer: xKiKix* Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/14/07 07:35 am Title: Chapter 4: Cold Showers

*gasp* they were SOOOO close.... i cant to read more....

Reviewer: xKiKix Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/19/07 11:22 pm Title: Prologue: Pick Up Lines

awww... its been a while since i've read this... i cant wait for more... lol...

Reviewer: moppy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/07 09:08 am Title: Chapter 3: Hollywood Knights

Please forgive me, I don't know why it took me so long to finally read this. It was mainly coz I thought it was a whole different story not Kellie and Aaron's side to SWIB.
It's pretty cool so far keep up the awesome job :D

Author's Response: aww it's ok everyone thought that at first i think. but yeah this is their story in addition to SWIB. Anyways moppy do you have an AIM account? or MSN messenger? hit me up with an IM sometime I'd LOVE to talk to ya!

Reviewer: Anita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/07 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 3: Hollywood Knights

well my head is kinda tired bu since you wanted feedback i can give ya some...hehe or i couls talk about something else...lol no just kidding;)
as i have already told you i really like the way aaron and nick are with each other could totally picture it for real...and aww to aaron being in love...i wish he will be for real someday...i still dont think it is love with Kaci...grr something fishy with her in my opnenion...

Author's Response: hehe yeah thanks hon!!

Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/07 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 3: Hollywood Knights

This story is so amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: heh thanks make sue you go check out it's sister story Somewhere I Belong if you haven't already