[Report This]Date: 11/23/06 03:40 am Title: Trick or Treat
This chapter was overall cute, but I had some fave parts.
?Now, off to the Batmobile!!?
?Whoot! I?m Batman!? Brian shouted, running off for the car with his jacket wide open and held out by his arms.
?Batman! Wait for Robin!? Nick yelled, quickly running after him. ?You need your sidekick!? - I can imagine them doing that.
?Nuh-uhs,? Tesia shook her head. ?Icky Wobin.?
?Nicky?s Robin?? A.J. repeated, then thought a moment. ?Oh! Batman?s sidekick, right??
Tesia nodded. ?Bwian Batsman!? - that was cute, too.
Author's Response: Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11/04/06 06:25 pm Title: Trick or Treat
that was adorable on how they celebrated halloween...and even cuter at the custome store how the T decided the right custom for them and they loved it too.
I cannot wait to continue to read more.
Author's Response: I just hope I can write more of it soon. Lol.
[Report This]Date: 11/03/06 03:30 am Title: Trick or Treat
Hehe that was cute. Nick and Brian had me laughing the entire time. MORE!
Author's Response: Haha. Glad yah enjoyed it Ashee.
[Report This]Date: 09/25/06 01:23 pm Title: Intruders.....
That was bit a scary someone in your home in the middle of the night and you also in it god what a scary thought...but very lovely the way all ended all in AJs room for a sleep over party lol!
Author's Response: Glad yah liked the slumber party. Lol.
[Report This]Date: 09/22/06 01:51 am Title: Intruders.....
Poor Tesia and Nicky, but good chapter overall.
Author's Response: Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 09/20/06 04:41 pm Title: Intruders.....
AWWW MORE Pease
Author's Response: I'll try to post more soon.
[Report This]Date: 09/20/06 05:17 am Title: Intruders.....
FIRST REVIEW! Hahahaha.
Anywho, as for my review.
Awwwww this chapter was really cute. It had it's suspenceful part but it was still really cute. Now update! So I can be first to review again.
Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks Ashee. Of course yah gonna be first, silly! I'm talkin' to yah right now, so I could give yah a heads up - Hehe. As for updating, that one took enough out of me for now. Lol.
Luvs yah!
[Report This]Date: 09/14/06 02:48 am Title: What The.....?
Tesia smiled at her brother, then summed up her courage and ran for the one she was after, crashing into his legs upon reaching him.
Kevin chuckled softly when he saw and felt her crash into his legs. ?Careful there, Hunny. Don?t wanna hurt yourself now.?
Tesia cocked her head to the side like she had before, watching him closely as he smiled warmly at her. ?Ups,? she told him finally. ?Pwease??
Kevin grinned and scooped her up into his lap. ?That better??
Tesia nodded as she stood upon his legs, to peer at his face better. She looked at him, not noticing or acknowledging the others who were all staring at her. ?Who you??
?I?m Kevin.?
?E-E-Evy??
?Sure, you can call me that,? Kevin told her. ?Some people call me Kevy anyway.?
?My Evy??
?Yes, your Kevy,? Kevin nodded, tickling her sides gently, as he was holding her steady. - that part was cute, and it seems like Tesia has developed a little crush on Kevin(I guess that's when Tesia started liking Kev).
Tesia shook her head, giggling, as she was now hanging upside down in Kevin?s lap as he tickled her playfully.
?See? She don?t mind!? Nick stated. ?C?mon Frick! Let?s get building!? - Tesia's too cute, and also I can imagine Nick asking that and I can picture Frick & Frack playing w/building blocks
PS. Update soon and write more cute Tesia/Kevin parts.
Author's Response: We shall see. We shall see. *sly grin*
[Report This]Date: 09/14/06 02:45 am Title: What The.....?
Tesia shook her head, giggling, as she was now hanging upside down in Kevin?s lap as he tickled her playfully.
?See? She don?t mind!? Nick stated. ?C?mon Frick! Let?s get building!? - I can imagine Nick saying that, and I can also picture them building w/little kids blocks, and the Kev thing was cute.
Tesia smiled at her brother, then summed up her courage and ran for the one she was after, crashing into his legs upon reaching him.
Kevin chuckled softly when he saw and felt her crash into his legs. ?Careful there, Hunny. Don?t wanna hurt yourself now.?
Tesia cocked her head to the side like she had before, watching him closely as he smiled warmly at her. ?Ups,? she told him finally. ?Pwease??
Kevin grinned and scooped her up into his lap. ?That better??
Tesia nodded as she stood upon his legs, to peer at his face better. She looked at him, not noticing or acknowledging the others who were all staring at her. ?Who you??
?I?m Kevin.?
?E-E-Evy??
?Sure, you can call me that,? Kevin told her. ?Some people call me Kevy anyway.?
?My Evy??
?Yes, your Kevy,? Kevin nodded, tickling her sides gently, as he was holding her steady. - that part was also cute, and it seems like Tesia has a crush on Kevin(so I guess that's when the crush started).
PS. Update soon and write more cute Kevin/Tesia stuff.
[Report This]Date: 09/11/06 10:44 pm Title: What The.....?
who would know that Kevin had that side of him too adorable...
Author's Response: Yup. Who knew? Lol.
[Report This]Date: 09/11/06 10:27 pm Title: Peeny Butter Tantrums
That was too cute and I can't believe it I use to like that cartoon but they no longer on the air at least not where i am at. also i like the way the boys handle her temtrum.
Author's Response: Yeah, Franklin's not bad. And glad yah liked how they handled her tantrum. I had to think, but I guess watching Supernanny finally came in handy. Lol.
[Report This]Date: 09/11/06 10:07 pm Title: The Secret
Too cute and adorable...I'm loving it but i can't face the way so easily give away the girl to AJ- what kind of father is?
Author's Response: I think you need to read the other fics in this series to find out. *innocent look*
[Report This]Date: 09/11/06 03:05 am Title: What The.....?
Hehe.... so cute. Id be curious about Kevin at first too LOL. And Brian and Nick are hilarious..... 'I'm building a house and a car!' 'I'm building people and a dog!' lmao....
Author's Response: Lol. Glad yah enjoyed that. Had to entertain y'all somehow. And I can picture them at age 15 & 20 doing just that - sitting there building with blocks. Hehe.
[Report This]Date: 09/07/06 02:47 am Title: Peeny Butter Tantrums
Awww..... hehe I love it. And I wanna read more lol. Update!
Author's Response: Ashee, you're gonna drive me crazeeee. Lol. Not 'till YOU update somethin'. Lol. Basically, I hafta still write the next chapter. Hehe.
[Report This]Date: 09/07/06 02:32 am Title: Peeny Butter Tantrums
?Oh, c?mon Alex. You make a mean sandwich,? Howie chuckled.
Tesia gasped. ?No meanie san?wich! No! Makes Daddy ?panks da meanie san?wich!?
A.J. just about doubled over with laughter at that. ?She?s priceless, I?m tellin? yah D. Priceless!?
?Alex, if only everybody could see you now,? Howie joshed. ?They?d never believe it. The hardcore rebel making silly faces at a toddler.?
A.J. stuck his tongue out at his friend. ?Laugh all yah want D., but keep it up an? I?ma make you change her diaper.?
Tesia giggled and gave his cheek a sloppy kiss. ?Wuvs J.?
A.J. felt his heart soar at hearing those two words. ?I love you too, T.,? he told her, knowing he meant it with every inch of his soul. - those three parts were cute.
PS. Update soon
Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks!
