[Report This]Date: 11/08/06 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is an interesting story, I like it. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll write more soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 10/30/06 02:34 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww. I feel so horrible for Baker. He did his best. How was he to know a harmless game of hide 'n' seek would go so wrong???
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Very true. Yeah, it is pretty sad. I couldn't imagine how it would feel to be Jackie too, just numb and sick like you want to turn yourself inside out.
[Report This]Date: 10/29/06 03:49 am Title: Chapter 1
*gasps* What happened to Brian!?!?!?! Where'd he go!?!?!?! They were only in the field - unless he fell in the river, drowned, & floated off. *gasps* LET HIM BE SAFE!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: It is really crazy. :) And the lighting too is crazy. Geesh those men are lucky they weren't struck.
