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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/13 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 15

Good job of wrapping it up. Thanks for submitting your story for the challenge. I give you credit for including your second story ever written! It's hard to do that but I also bet it helps to show you how much you have grown as a writer.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/13 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 14

Aww it's never easy when someone dies, especially someone you care about. I hate when the guys die, it always breaks my heart. I'm glad he had the rest of them by his side when it happened. Good job!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/13 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 13

Poor Kevin

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/13 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 12

Hey Erika, you might want to consider breaking up the different scenes in this chapter with a ~*~*~* or something like that. It got a little confusing going back and forth between the Nadine scenes and the Kevin scenes. Just something to think about. I have been guilty of that myself many times lol

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/13 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 11

Once again, poor Kevin runs to the bathroom to get sick and instead of Nadine going after him, which she should do because she is supposedly his hospice volunteer, she stays behind LOL I'm so glad that Kevin told her to leave, I really hope she does. It just is clear that this girl is too messed up to be with Kevin who clearly needs more stability since he's dying.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/13 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey Erika! This isn't a review but a friendly reminder to start your stories for the challenge. Most people are already at the halfway point in reading their stuff and you haven't started yet. Just thought I'd give you a nudge. lol I'll be back to reading in a few days. I'm going back and forth between yours and Emily's and since Em's is 41 chapters I usually read ten at a time. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/13 01:13 am Title: Chapter 10

The winner for worst volunteer ever is Nadine! LOL GO HOME!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/13 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 9

Poor Kevin, Chemo can be rough.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/13 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 8

Glad to hear they are going to go ahead and record their last album together. Good decision!



Author's Response:

There were some good ideas in there lol. Thank you Mare!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/13 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm sure you're getting a kick out of me and these reviews because I'm the only one that probably cheered at the thought of Nadine getting kicked out and going back to wherever she came from and then the boys can enjoy some quality time togther before Kevin dies. lol



Author's Response:

I sure am. You have made me think about how stuck I was on the romantic aspect of the story, when there was so much more to happen and tell. Poor Nadine!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/13 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 6

Poor Kevin, it's not enough the guy is dying of terminal cancer but he has to actually take care of Nadine because she can't handle her alcohol! I want to smack her.



Author's Response:

This review cracked me up! You are so right.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/13 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'm glad Kevin got away to the beach. It should do him some good and being with the boys is always a plus.



Author's Response:

Yes he needed some fresh air lol.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/13 12:48 am Title: Chapter 4

It was nice seeing the boys make an appearance. I think your grammar etc... is fine. Not sure if that's what you fixed when you said you were afriad I would click right out? lol but no worries on that front. I think the whole idea of this taking place in a hospice was a great concept, but usually when  people go into hospice care, they are weeks away from death. I am having a hard time with Kevin as a hottie when in my mind he should be on death's door but like you said, this is something you wrote early on and didn't put emphasis on that side of the story. I'm just coming from the drama/ emo angle more so than a budding romance angle. It's how I roll but you are talking to a girl who has only written one female character in all her stories that hasn't died or turned evil LOL



Author's Response:

woohoo!! The grammar comment coming from you is great to hear. I fixed that and the story was really rushed the first time around. It was even more teeny bopperish lol.

Mare you are right I wish I would of thouht about the fact that he was dying more than the whole Kevin lookin hot for Nadine. Ugh! I know what you mean, now I'm thinkin of somany different ways this story could have gone. Thanks so much Mare!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

Poor Kevin, cancer sucks.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 12:12 am Title: Chapter 2

You know me and my anti romance self wants to smack both Sarah and Nadine and remind them that maybe the reason Kevin is a little grouchy is because he's dying and all... LOL Poor Kevin.



Author's Response:

I was so teeny bopper when I wrote this that now I wish I would have focused a litte less on the romantic aspect of the story. The girls are star struck...hehe.