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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/13 10:22 am Title: Chapter 15: December 25th, 7:15 A.M.

Thank you, Mare for a sweet and happy ending. :D

Aww Baylee loves his uncles. What a sweet baby. And LOL at the train... Baylee loves the box. Typical one year old. I hope it serves as a lesson to the guys. That it's easy to make one year old happy.

Thank you for this story, Mare. I love it and I was greatly entertained. :)

Author's Response:

Cats and babies love boxes! LOL thanks for reading and reviewing along the way, Ritz! This is one of my stories that tends to get ignored so it was a lot of fun watching someone read along to it! :O)

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Date: 07/03/13 10:18 am Title: Chapter 14: December 25th, 4:30 A.M.

Finally, after 7 hours they are finished. lol. Sweet Uncles... they wanna see Bay's face when he sees all the presents. After hardwork, they have their reward later... Baylee's smile.

And for Kevin : If I were Kristin, I'd gladly open the door for you even at 5 am, if it means having you all by myself on a christmas morning. lol

Author's Response:

Yes, they were a little slow. I imagine now with all the practice they've had doing this over the years they have it down to a record amount of time assembling everything and laying it out under their trees! LOL

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Date: 07/03/13 10:13 am Title: Chapter 13: December 25th, 3:45 A.M.

Whymy review above is not complete? I remember writing "You are a genius, Mare. You always come up with a creative line be it dramatic or something funny." That's not exactly the wording but that's the idea. I love how creative you are.

When you decide to re-read the story, I'm pretty sure you'll cringe at some point. But then you will realize how much you've grown and improved as a writer. Plus you'll ignore the writing style and will have so much fun reading the story. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Ritz! :O)

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Date: 07/02/13 10:54 am Title: Chapter 13: December 25th, 3:45 A.M.

"Nah, because once one of the Nsync boys read it they would be cramming themselves into a dollhouse or something for more attention."

Author's Response:

hehe *adjusts halo*

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Date: 07/02/13 10:48 am Title: Chapter 12: December 25th, 2:55 A.M.

I hope Baylee would love that train set. LOL

Awww, I love when the guys get serious. :)

Author's Response:

I would have loved that train set! LOL

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Date: 07/02/13 10:45 am Title: Chapter 11: December 25th, 2:25 A.M.

LOL LOL LOL

Howie with a stuffed fish plus winking disorder. Nick asking for a pair of mittens. Leighanne giving a look that could kill. This chapter is hilarious. I literally laughed out loud at the end. Good thing it was our lunch break, no one is around me. *wink*

Author's Response:

lmao aww that all just sounds so silly! I am going to have to reread this story I think. I have been afriad to do it because of the cinrgeworthiness but I might just go ahead and do it anyway!

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Date: 07/02/13 10:40 am Title: Chapter 10: December 25th, 1:42 A.M.

I have to google again what Candy Land is... lol

If I have money, I will pay just to see these guys playing Candly Land and having so much fun playing it. This is a very good view to watch. :)

Author's Response:

Candy Land is the most awesome kid's game ever! LOL You're never too old for that one!

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Date: 07/01/13 10:41 am Title: Chapter 9: December 25th, 1:20 A.M.

Awww poor Nick. But it was good his siblings experienced visits from Santa. Gotta admire Nick for being a good brother.

LOL at AJ for telling the guys they were too functional for him. :D

Author's Response:

LOL aww thanks, Ritz! I think Nick is a really good big brother!

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Date: 07/01/13 10:18 am Title: Chapter 8: December 25th, 12:45 A.M.

I had to google the gifts they wanted because I thought I dont know them. lol and had to re-read the chapter so I will understand it completely. Poor Howie. LOL

Author's Response:

Now I might have to reread the chapter so I know what gifts you are talking about lol

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Date: 06/29/13 11:04 am Title: Chapter 6: December 24th, 11:37 P.M.

This kind of fiction is not suitable for a non-fan. They will find this boring or non-sense at all, but for a BSB fan, this is an enjoyable one. Making fun of each other then the jokes will lead to serious stuff then back to jokes. This is hilarious. :)

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, I know. If people read this and didn't know BSB they'd be WTF? and have stopped reading after the first chapter. Something like this is purely for the fans to appreciate because it's just stupid and silly lmao Thanks, Ritz!

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Date: 06/29/13 10:51 am Title: Chapter 5: December 24th, 11:00 P.M.

Kevin and Nick... I really love when these two tease each other. And Howie is making me laugh. I am enjoying this.

Author's Response:

LOL I enjoyed having Kevin not be able to open a box!

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Date: 06/29/13 10:47 am Title: Chapter 4: December 24th, 10:43 P.M.

What Brian said touched my heart... Picking up ypur baby is like unwrapping a gift over and over again. That's so genius of you, Mare.

Author's Response:

aww thanks, Ritz! I would think that's exactly what it feels like. :O)

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Date: 06/29/13 10:43 am Title: Chapter 3: December 24th, 10:15 P.M.

LOL. I agree with Howard 100%, What a shitty conversation. Now, I understand Leighanne why she freaked out when she learned the boys are coming over. Hopefully, they will not ruin Bay's christmas. :)

Author's Response:

LOL yes, there was a lot of 'potty' humor in this chapter!

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Date: 06/25/13 10:55 am Title: Chapter 2: December 24th 9:45 P.M.

the way the boys acted brought me back to early 2000. This is one of my favorites in Mare's stories, the guys interaction. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I really try to have their interactions be as real as possible. :O)

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/13 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1: December 24th, 9 P.M.

I really like the way you describe things. the description of the couples' facial expressions definitely added an element of comedy. I think, I'm going to like this one.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Ritz! I think this one is definintely one of the goffier things I've ever written, but it was fun to just step away from the serious and just be ridiculous. I really hope you enjoy!