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Reviewer: elsabeth99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/07 06:36 am Title: With Commentary by Yours Truly

Nice...everyone needs a yellow house :o)

Author's Response: Especially when all the others are green. ;)

Reviewer: DragonStar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/07 09:40 pm Title: With Commentary by Yours Truly

Love this story.

But you already knew that.

I hope you get an A+++(I know there's no such grade, lol)!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Awwwww... Thanks Mel! :* And sure there is, it's called a 5.0... Haha. ;) (except that's GPA... but anyway...)

Reviewer: ForeverRebel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/07 07:30 pm Title: With Commentary by Yours Truly

Roflmao......This was really funny!
I loved it. Good job

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Estrelleta Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/07 06:31 pm Title: With Commentary by Yours Truly

LOL.
I hope your presentation went well.
I thought the story was quite well written, and funny. Good luck!

Author's Response: Awwww... Thanks. :) I was in Japanese class when you responded, so your luck was still before the fact. And thankfully, I didn't actually have to read it... But they'll go home and pick apart my writing... *nervous*

Reviewer: Mare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/07 02:29 am Title: With Commentary by Yours Truly

Aww that was really cute and funny. you did a great job :O) I am sad to say i have described my house many times as the one with the tree in front of it! lmao

Author's Response: Thanks Mare! :* It's okay, I do the same thing. "It's those huge towers... You can't miss them!" Haha. I think everyone does it... :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/07 02:26 am Title: With Commentary by Yours Truly

Loved it! Very cute and funny! I enjoyed the characterization and the dialogue, and how the story kept coming back to the green house, and then it turned out it was a yellow house they were standing in front of the whole time... hahaha. Like I said, funny!!

Author's Response: Thanks Julie! :* And as to why the yellow house... I just thought if I were going to be nice and have them eventually find the house, that it needed a little twist. ;)

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/07 02:01 am Title: With Commentary by Yours Truly

i enjoyed this story! it was cute and the narrator's sarcasm was perfect at just the right times. i enjoyed the teenybopper institute advertisement LOL. great job! poor guy, standing in front of the one house he needed to be at...

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments! :D And I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :)