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Reviewer: AJsTourBarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/14 12:30 am Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

I have been reading this series for the past few days and i love it! You have done an amazing job with the series so far. I saw that there's a unfinished part 2 to this particular story, do you have plans to finish the Nick and Alyssa series?

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/08 04:05 am Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

what a wonderful ending to an amazing story Teri :) I cant believe it took me so long to read it!!!! but you are just an amazing writer and i absoultely love your stories!!!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 04:33 am Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

Great stuff...love the way they came back to each other...love everything, ready to read the next installment! 

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/08 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 28: Angst Isn't a Four-Letter Word

LOL...their marriage counselor is Dr. Drew...I love it.  I think her going to Nashville is a huge step...can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/08 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 27: 4 In The Morning

I love this chapter...they actually REALLY talked about things...so good...moving on...

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/08 05:18 am Title: Chapter 26: Bleed It Out

I think Nick was right to ask them to leave...that would be a lot to have that many people hovering, they need to grieve together.  I don't think Alyssa intentionally wanted to hurt herself, it was just the frustration, then the mirror broke, then there she was - I am not surprised by his reaction at all...he is hurting and trying so hard to break through to her...her hurting herself like that was the ultimate slap in the face.  I know he will come back, I hope this snapped her back into reality...

Nighty night...more later...I did actually do a little writing today...super busy weekend ahead of us!!!



Author's Response: yay for writing! and yes it was like a slap in the face to him. she'd promised to never do it again and then yeah you get the picture. you're right though they need to deal with this together as a couple, alone. and they will! happy reading/writing/having a fun weekend!!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/08 05:06 am Title: Chapter 25: The Importance Of Family

I think the fact that she is showing some emotion, even if it is anger and she is expressing it by trashing the nursery is a good sign...

I'm so sleepy, I need to go to bed...one more :o)



Author's Response: aww go to sleep hon you can always read more when you have more time! yeah her showing growth is a good sign shows theres some hope.

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/08 04:57 am Title: Chapter 24: Gin And Catatonic

Why are they talking about breaking up?  Talk about making a bad situation worse.  OMG...I can't imagine how it feels to be Alyssa, waking up to find that your baby is gone...horrible.

Can it really get worse?  I know it can't be sunshine and puppies...but what would be worse...a group suicide pact?

Still reading...



Author's Response: no suicide pact i promise! but there's a lot of inner demons that have only been talked about that will start coming to the surface. and no they're not breaking up!! they'll come close but they won't actually I promise you that. Lol i'm working on the sequel to this story so OBVIOUSLY still together.

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/08 04:50 am Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc

So so so sad, I can't imagine anything worse than losing a child..that has to be the worst feeling in the world...Alyssa never got to see her son :o(



Author's Response: yeah it's really really sad and it's so sad because it happens every day too. I definitely didn't want to be cookie cutter and by some miracle it turned out all sunshine and puppies ya know? I really hope you stick with the story it gets a lil worse before it gets better though I'm afraid.

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/08 04:42 am Title: Chapter 22: When It All Falls Down

How scary...next chapter...need to see what happens...

Author's Response: yeah this one and the next one were EXTREMELY hard to write.

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/08 04:33 am Title: Chapter 21: It's Just Too Little Too Late

OMG...how horrible that her sister was raped!  Baby time...isn't it too soon?  Jane needs to go - since when is she the moral fabric?  WTF???



Author's Response: yeah it is horrible that people in this world will rape a woman just because she likes another woman. Jane...definitely NOT moral fabric LOL she's trying to be all pious which she thinks she can do to manipulate people. The other thing I have no comment just yet. lol thank you for reading again hehe!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/08 04:25 am Title: Chapter 20: Salvation

Big chapter!  Why is Jane still there?  Is it to take care of Alyssa?  If so, why did she stay after Ollie and Angie arrived?  I am so glad they reconnected...I hope that continues...and OMG, how horrible that the girls were attacked...and remind me again why Jane went to the hospital...:o).  Moving along...

Author's Response: Cuz I wanted Jane at the hospital...big drama!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/08 05:26 am Title: Chapter 19: Return Of The Bitch

Very sweet chapter...I love the gesture with the cars and him doing the stuff for the nursery.  Things seem to be getting a bit better, hopefully it will continue to go that way!  Another great chapter!



Author's Response: lol this is merely the calm before the storm! i warn ya there's mucho drama and tragedy ahead

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/08 05:16 am Title: Chapter 18: Big Fat Liar

Grrr at both of them...Nick for pulling this BS with Emma and Alyssa for not including him in the pregnancy...how could she not immeidately let him know their child has a heart defect???  I would have never been able to keep that from my husband when I was pregnant.  They have a lot of stuff that they need to work on before they can even think about getting married...grrr...



Author's Response: EXACTLY! that was the reason I wrote this. I wanted to prove they weren't all that perfect.

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/08 05:05 am Title: Chapter 17: Ballad Of The Missing Pooch

OK...if she had spotting and an amnio done, why didn't she even attempt to call Nick!?!?!?!? 

Author's Response: cuz she didn't want to worry him. I know sounds stupid but girls do stupid things when they're pregnant.