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Reviewer: frackgirl20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/08 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: Guess What?!

 

hehe man i could almost feel the nerves alyssa had when she had to tell her parents she was preggers lol man to think that one dy i could be me or you...lol well most likely not with nick but then with another sexy man ;)

but i keep on having this bad feeling in my little stomach...somthing is gonna go wrong i jus know it! i guess it has to do with you telling me to have  a lot of tissiues with me...

Reviewer: frackgirl20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 4: Pitter Patter

aww nick as a dad...how cute is that! lol at the oral thing man sometiems you kill me girl with your funny jokes and what not ..hehe

but i actually didnt know the fact about it tasting different...lol..well anyway on to the next chappy..am i doing oki? 

Reviewer: frackgirl20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 3: Happy Birthday Mr. President

wow again you an awsome writter!!! i cant wait for the next chappy i totally love the chemestry between alyssa and nick wish i had that with someone ( nick too) lol and how bold to mention we all know who from ld!!! haha

Author's Response: Lol thankees hon!

Reviewer: Sweetyfranzi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/08 01:07 am Title: Chapter 26: Bleed It Out

There go the tears again...

Reviewer: Sweetyfranzi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/08 12:36 am Title: Chapter 24: Gin And Catatonic

You just made me cry...

Great story though.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/17/07 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

Wow congratz on such an amazing story! I really enjoyed it! You're a really good writter! Keep the good work up!

Reviewer: Airok Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/17/07 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

Wow, I loved this chapter! Perfect ending to AS. The idea of building a new dream home together is awesome. That way they can start over in a way and hopefully become the Ali and Nick we used to know or get even closer than they were.
What Nick said to her about her already being is wife was the cutest thing! It just showed how much he really loves her and needs her.
After all they have been through as friends and then lovers they never stopped loving each other. AS proved, that they both are just meant to be!
Can't wait to go on reading the sequel, I'm sure that I'll love it as much as AIL, SWIB, and AS!

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/07 07:22 am Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

that was completely awesome and a great ending for the story you tied it up well i look forward for more!

Reviewer: xKiKix Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/17/07 06:46 am Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

yay... you know what i cant wait... i hope that the story with aaron and kellie would continue one day... pls let me know... anyways loved this chapter... nick and ali getting some love...lol...

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/07 05:16 am Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

It was such a great chapter and story. i am so glad that they are getting back to how they were. yay. but it is sad this story is over but i cant wait for the sequel to start yay yay yay yay yay.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/07 04:40 am Title: Chapter 34: Rock The Boat

First of all, I love the title. lol. It's perfect. This chapter was SO much fun. It was really just perfect Nick and Ali. It was an amazing way to end the story because it definitely provided hope for the future of their relationship and their life together. They got back the sexual energy somewhat, but they didn't "ruin" it by taking it all the way too quickly. They concentrated on unselfishly pleasing each other and relaxing with the sexual acts that they did do and there was a certain spontaneity to it. I really loved it. They're also flirty again... You have no idea how much I missed their flirty behavior back and forth. I can really see them returning back to how they were at the very beginning of their relationship with, of course, an added bonus of being emotionally open and close as well. Overall, it was amazing and a really great way to end an emotional story. I can't wait for the next story to begin... I can't wait to see what lies ahead for Nick and Ali.

And, no... You're Yoda, missy, and don't you forget it! :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/12/07 04:44 pm Title: Author's Note Very Important!!!

I think you sould just split it into two stories.

Reviewer: Airok Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/12/07 02:11 pm Title: Author's Note Very Important!!!

Hey, weird as it is, I've just been thinking about that too. Well not exactly the same, but I was wondering if the story would end soon since it's starting to go in a different direction than before. The song probably wouldn't really fit for the next part anymore.
I think that it would be better the split it up in two stories since Ali and Nick's life together is taking another turn (hopefully for the better :D). So yeah, I'd love to have a sequel to AS, but that's just my opinion. Hope I could help a lil though :) Oh and update soon please!! Totally love this story!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/07 03:20 am Title: Author's Note Very Important!!!

i think go for the sequal

Reviewer: csmbabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/07 03:12 am Title: Author's Note Very Important!!!

I think either way would be fine, I mean as long as the story will still go on. I just hope things start looking up for Aylssa and Nick cause right now it would just really really suck to be them lol.