Date: 12/02/07 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 21: It's Just Too Little Too Late
i wouldnt be surprised if jane had soemthing to do with what happened to olivia and angela
Date: 12/02/07 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 20: Salvation
*burst into tears grabbing tissue*
Date: 12/02/07 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 19: Return Of The Bitch
much much better chapter but im still weary of all of your warnings
Date: 12/02/07 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 18: Big Fat Liar
ok yeah you were right, this chapter had me crying and screw nick its not alyssas fault nicks an ass
Date: 12/02/07 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 17: Ballad Of The Missing Pooch
ugh frustrating chapter but dont worry still very good
Date: 12/02/07 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 16: Country-Ville
ugh nick im so ready to slap you WOULD YOU JUST GET OVER EMMA YOU'RE ANNOYING ME AND HA SEE WHAT A BITCH YOUR MOTHER IS
Date: 12/02/07 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 15: Monster-In-Law
awesome job with the chapter it saddens me with all of their fighting but its realistic, they cant always be a happy perfect couple
Date: 12/02/07 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Cupid's Arrow
Another great chapter..keep on going!
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Date: 12/02/07 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 31: Shadow Of The Day
omg so great really well done cant wait for more. =D
Date: 12/02/07 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 14: Sexual Frustration's A Bitch
poor nick i understand how hard it is for him yet i understand the fear from alyssa too
Date: 12/02/07 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 13: Happy First Birthday Jamie!!
very good chatper can we have alyssa just attack jane please?
Date: 12/02/07 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 31: Shadow Of The Day
I admit I almost cried Teri....the last couple of chapters made me think of my hubby and how much i hate being away from him all the time :( but anyway great chapters I cant wait to read some more :D
Date: 12/02/07 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 31: Shadow Of The Day
I left some stuff out of my last review. I'm glad that Nick and Ali talked about losing Noah. They discussed it with such openness that shows that there's been some time for them to think about stuff. I don't blame Ali for being scared of trying to have more kids. That's gotta be really difficult. I'm sure Nick will convince her to have kids in the future, though, since he really wants a family. I think they're both craving a family so much to prove that they can handle it. Nick's been blinded in the past just because he so wants a family. I'm sure he'll get his way in the future and he and Ali will be better off because of it. Like it was left, things take time to work out. It just wasn't their time to have kids. It could be a lot worse. At least they can still have kids in the future. Not saying that's the answer, but after they work out their grief, they'll be able to try again and it'll be great.
I loved the chapter. I can't wait for more! I'm counting down till Nick and Ali are them again. And they're definitely getting there. :D YAY!
Date: 12/02/07 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 31: Shadow Of The Day
Awe, this was a great chapter, Teri. It looks like Alyssa is over her fears of Nick cheating on her with Emma. I felt so bad for Alyssa because she got the impression that Nick had sex with Emma.
I'm glad that he told her that Emma had kissed him and he left. I think that just did a lot of good for her to know that. Then they were in the same spot that Noah was conceived, oh my. I really enjoyed how they talked about Noah and eventually having another baby. That really was a great spark to this chapter.
You did a wonderful job on this chapter. Gah, I loved everything about it. It was fantastic. Please write more soon. :D
Date: 12/02/07 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 31: Shadow Of The Day
Great description of emotions in this chapter. I know exactly what Alyssa's feeling and her feelings are rational. Sometimes if girls are too insecure and clingy, it's annoying. But Alyssa's feelings make sense. She's modest enough to be worried about Nick's faithfulness to her.
I liked that you included Kellie in this chapter. On a smaller scale, she's going through what Nick is with Ali. She wants the old Ali back, but she knows it's going to take time. It also showed that "life goes on." Kellie's moving in with AJ and Ali didn't even realize it'd been long enough for that progression to take place. Ali and Nick aren't in a bubble and life around them doesn't stop when they're figuring their stuff out. It was good to see that.
I loved loved loved the scene when Nick told Ali what happened. I'm really glad you decided to have him tell her sooner rather than later. It shows a lot of maturity on his part that he can just tackle something before it becomes an issue. So woo! I'm glad that they're having little victories here and there. The kiss was definitely a little victory for Nick and Ali.
The fact that they were standing in the same place Noah was conceived was powerful. They've come full circle kind of. Granted, they have a lot of stuff to work through still, but they're realizing that everything they've gone through has made them into the people they are now. They're going to work through their problems, move on, and everything will be all right. This chapter showed that. They might face conflict, but they'll work it out. And they'll work it out together. No matter what's going on around them, they're Nick and Ali and they're meant to be, even if the stuff around them isn't.
