Date: 12/02/07 06:42 am Title: Chapter 12: Pink Or Blue
ew shes back? that sucks
Date: 12/02/07 06:36 am Title: Chapter 11: Self-Image
uh oh stupid emma again? ugh hate her
Date: 12/02/07 06:26 am Title: Chapter 10: Theory Of Relativity
i highly enjoyed this chapter very very sweet and im glad for these chapters cuz i know i wont be happy later by your warnings
Date: 12/02/07 06:21 am Title: Chapter 9: Girls' Day Out
wow for the most part that was really hot
Date: 12/02/07 06:10 am Title: Chapter 8: Life's A Beach
oooohhh very good job i got a bit nervous but i enjoyed this
Date: 12/02/07 06:04 am Title: Chapter 7: Tabloid Fodder
omg i so hate jane for this chapter ugh can i please please slap her?
Date: 12/02/07 05:57 am Title: Chapter 6: Privacy Is A Relative Term
hey great job with this chapter though i did NOT like the emma part....
Date: 12/02/07 02:49 am Title: Chapter 5: Guess What?!
ooohhh leslie is engaged!
Date: 12/02/07 02:38 am Title: Chapter 4: Pitter Patter
yay she is pregnant great job! love love loved this chapter!!!! *claps*
Date: 12/02/07 02:20 am Title: Chapter 3: Happy Birthday Mr. President
i was suspecting that she was pg from the second half of the last chapter
Date: 12/02/07 02:12 am Title: Chapter 2: Duty Calls
ok if nick does something with this emma girl and screws up im gonna be so pissed!
Date: 12/02/07 12:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Cupid's Arrow
excellent job i love how they connect
Date: 12/01/07 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 30: There's No Such Thing As Progress Without A Little Regression
Sorry I hadn't gotten a chance to review sooner between work and Christmas shopping I've been tied up hehe... Again I read MOST of this chapter, so I'll only comment on what I haven't read.
Damn lol I know I said I wouldn't feel any sympathy for Emma, but you made me feel just a TEEENY bit bad for her. By no means do I think that Nick didn't make the right descion. He belongs w/ Ali 1000%. Just it was like Aww... She worked up ALL that courage to tell him how she felt and even kissed him only to get horribly rejected which is a real sucky feeling. Damn that Emma lol You really want to hate her, but can't lol.
I wonder now if Nick is going to be honest and confess to Alyssa about the kiss?
Date: 12/01/07 02:03 am Title: Chapter 30: There's No Such Thing As Progress Without A Little Regression
Okay, wow, this chapter was fantastic. You did a great job on this chapter. It was incredible to say the least. They're emotions were really opened up in this chapter a lot to me. It seems that therapy is doing them good. Alyssa opened up about the dream that she's been having. Hopefully, that'll stop really soon.
Ah, I bet it doesn't help Alyssa to hear everyone talking about cheating in that class of hers. Then she crosses path with Brandon and the topic comes up. Awe, she got a letter from Trina. That had to be hard because Trina is pregnant..it probably reminds her of Noah a lot.
Oh my, Emma was the one to make a move on Nick. She's telling him all this stuff about loving him. Nick finally takes notice that all the signs were there. Hm, I can't believe she laid one on him. I'm proud of him - he knew what he wanted and that wasn't Emma. It's Alyssa. He left. What a good boy he is.
Now the question that is pondering in my mind is..if he'll tell Alyssa about Emma coming onto him and all that junk. If he does I'm sure that it'll make her feel better about trusting him because he came to her to tell her about it.
Ah, this chapter was great, Teri. I'm definitely excited to see what is going to be happening next. I hope that you'll be writing more as soon as possible. Great job! :D
Date: 12/01/07 01:37 am Title: Chapter 30: There's No Such Thing As Progress Without A Little Regression
Hey, this is the first time i post a review, i read the previous stories and now i'm reading this one, they're amazing! you're a really good writer, congrats. This was a very good chappie, specially the last part, i saw this coming sooner or later, i'm glad nick left at that moment but know i wonder how things are gonna get between Nick and Emm, and i hope Nick and Alyssa get back on track soon, but i'm sure there's more drama to come. Keep up the great work :D
