Date: 10/04/08 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell freaking no! You can't let Brian die, are you INSANE?!?! I'm like in tears over here, I hope you know! I can't believe he's having issues again. The whole thing is too real...I was in 3rd grade when my dad had his first heart attack...it killes 1/3 of his heart and they didn't expect him to live...he's had a couple more since then, a couple strokes and a lot of other related issues...So, I can picture it all clearly and it's really tuggin at my heart! I know how hard it it to be the one waiting, the frustration AJ feels, the nervousness of Kevin and everything. I am definately feeling the emotions of the story, Ahley. Very well written!
Author's Response: Trust me, it's even harder to be the one writing this. I feel like a major poop. LoL. I'm glad you seem to be liking this so far and I hope you continue to read and review. Thanks for the feedback Shaniqua! [Ashley]
Date: 08/12/08 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow what a chapter! So Brian had a heart attack, eh? Definitely not a good thing.. I wonder how his family is going to react to that, obviously not well. Still really awesome writing! I love it!
Author's Response: I figured I might as well strike him down quick. I thought a heart attack would do the job nicely. Glad you think so also! Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 04/30/08 05:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Damnit!! Lol. I was on chapter three, thinking it was chapter two this whole time, lol. Don't know how that happened. Well, just got done reading the "real" chapter two, lol. Man... the part where Kevin said "My cousin is dyring... and I couldn't even tell him." that got me SUPER emo!! =[ Okay, on to chapter 4 now, lol.
Author's Response: Well, that certainly makes me feel better now because I couldn't for the life of me understand why you were calling chapter 3 "chapter 2". It's all good though. I remember when I wrote that line from Kevin...it took a while to get it out because I was trying to imagine how exactly I would feel if I were in that position, but I realized there wasn't much thought that needed to be put into it. Kevin's statement said it all. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 01/24/08 03:30 am Title: Chapter 2
A heart attack?! I wish I had time to read more, but as it is, I'll have to come back later. You do such a great job with the emotion in the writing. I feel like I'm right there with them experiencing the pain first hand. Keep up the good work. I'll be a regular reader of this story from here on out! You have me compeltely hooked!
Author's Response: Ok, may I say shibby to the fact that I've managed to hook you with this? That just makes me feel great and I think I may just have to go do another little happy dance like I did after I updated. LoL. So shibby to your enjoyment and shibby to me hopefully getting a chapter out soon! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/19/07 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
awesome..
Author's Response: Tankies lil' sis! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/19/07 08:32 am Title: Chapter 2
aaww... *thumbs up*
Author's Response: Hehe...thumbs up is always a good sign! Can't wait to see what you think of the rest of what's been written so far, and there's a ton more to come! Tankies lil' sis! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/21/07 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww man, this is sad!!!
Author's Response: Just call me Drama Queen! LoL. Thanks for the review! Chapter 3 is already in the works so keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/21/07 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
No! *snffles* Poor Brian..poor Kevin...:o( That sucks that there is very slim chance...and Brian doesnt even know yet. Damn...talk about a shitty deal of cards! Amazing chapter though. Cant wait for 3
Author's Response: Geez, yeah, tell me about it. Poor Brian and poor Kevin! A definite shitty dealing of cards. We'll just have to see what happens... [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/21/07 03:33 am Title: Chapter 2
*blinks back tears & gasps* OMG!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOMEbody get him a new heart!!!!!!!!! STAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*wails*
You CAN'T kill him off!!! YOU CAN'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL, Lenni...I ALWAYS enjoy your reviews. You are always so enthusiastic with what you have to say, which makes reading your reviews more enjoyable. Sadly enough though, I am unable to give you any sort of word towards Brian's fate at this moment. If I told ya, it would kill the suspense, and then what would be the purpose in you reading the story? So needless to say, guess you will just half to wait. Thanks for the review and keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
This chapter shook me to the core.. esp. the last part when Kev said well you know.. It just felt so real and I'm guessing that it had to do with Brian's heart problem back then.. Great Job! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I am very happy to know that I am working out the emotions right in the story so far. I wasn't sure about the flow of this chapter, but I guess I got it right. Glad I tugged at your emotions chord. Thanks for the review and keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh no!!!! Don't kill my baby!!! I love Brian!!! Ok, I guess you can kill him if you need to, but I promise you I will cry if you do! -lol I about cried just now!!!
Author's Response: I'm not saying a word about what's gonna happen. Actually, truth be told, I am still trying to decide. Thanks for the second review! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh no!
Man, that made me cry!
That is so sad though. When are they going to get a hold of Leigh?
UPDATE SOON! :P ^_^
You're doing great
Author's Response: Seriously made you cry? Guess I am doing something right! I'm hoping they get a hold of Leigh soon...but who knows? Thanks for the review! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 08:39 am Title: Chapter 2
You've sucked me into reading this, even though it totally freaks me out and makes me completely neurotic.
You're gonna keep writing it, right?
Author's Response: Sorry it freaks you out and of course I'm going to keep writing it. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
