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Reviewer: pbaby94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/09 02:48 am Title: Chapter 6

OMG I LOVE this fan fic im on Ch.6 right now and it is marvelous. I dont read books ofthen because they dont appeal to me or cathc my eye but i mean goodness i cant stop reading it! Baylee adds a good laugh despite all the drama thats going on

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/08 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

Curse stubborn Brian!! Lol. He doesn't want to die, yet he doesn't want to go to this rehabilitation center that could possibly aide him in his condition better than the hospital could. And uh-oh for the little dispute between Nick and Brian. Hope Brian will be okay. *goes on to chapter 7*



Author's Response: Can't blame Brian for being a little shook over what's going on. I'm sure I would have the same attitude if I were in his position. Thanks for the review PR! [Ashley]

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/01/07 03:12 am Title: Chapter 6

Baylee honestly is too cute for words! God, the child is so adorable and innocent. Poor Brian though! Denial is disappearing and reality is setting in. Nick though....he shouldn't treat Brian so fragile. Although, its hard to act normal in such situations.... great chapter. Sorry it took me half the year to read it!!!

Author's Response: Gotta love kids right? Well at least I do. Maybe that's why I worked in a day care for so many years. I kinda miss it actually. People handle situations differently so I can understand how Brian is acting. Then again I can also understand how Nick is acting. It's about time my advisor is starting to read this again. I think that's why I gave you the title of advisor in the first place...duh! LoL. You have alot to catch up on though! Thanks for the review Ashie! [Ashley]

Reviewer: luci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/28/07 07:32 am Title: Chapter 6

yeesh.. reckon u can write a happy story one day... and where is leighanne!?!??!?!

Author's Response: Well I reckon I could write a story one day too. Only problem is I never seem to be able to finish the ones I start. Don't worry. Leighanne will show up soon! [Ashley]

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/07 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

it COULD be too easy...but like, at the last minute, the shipment could get in just in time.....*sniffles again after re-reading it*

Author's Response: I know, I know, but unfortunately, I'm not God so I can't control fate...LoL, heh. Glad you liked the chapter (at least I perceive that you liked the chapter?) Keep checking back for updates. I've got a semi start on the next chap so I should have it up within the next week or so. Just haven't had much time to write and started to have a slight case of writer's block. Not to worry though, I don't believe the writer's block is terminal this time. I just think my mind is finally catching up with the fact that I still have Brian stuck in the hospital and I hate hospitals in general. So like I said, keep checking back for an update! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Stitch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/07 09:59 am Title: Chapter 6

wooooooheeee....GREAT! I like your story pretty much!!! Keep up the good work!! Greetz from Germany!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you are liking the story so far! Keep checking back for updates. I'm hopin to have a new chap posted soon! [Ashley]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you are liking the story so far! Keep checking back for updates. I'm hopin to have a new chap posted soon! [Ashley]

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/07 04:31 am Title: Chapter 6

he could get one of those plastic fake/but real hearts! like an artificial one! *wipes tears*

Author's Response: Hmmm, maybe he could, but c'mon now...don'tcha think that would be a little too easy? LoL, besides I called the heart factory and they are currently out of the plastic-silicon material needed to construct the artificial heart. Good news is they will be receiving a shipment of the material. Bad news is the shipment won't arrive until I am finished writing the story... LoL, thanks for the review! I really appreciate it and keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/07 08:05 am Title: Chapter 6

*screams* NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT!!!!! NOT ON MY BIRTHDAY BUSTER!!!!!!!!!! BREATHE!!!!!!!!!! RELAX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm as scared as you are B-rok!!!!!! The whole death thing....*shudders*.....I change the subject- sing IWITW!!!! That always helps me for a while!!!! [haha, advice to a fic character - but this is MY B-rok we're talkin' about!]

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! LET HIM LIVE!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Haha, Lenni. Always my most enthusiastic reviewer! You're awesome and I am glad you enjoyed the chapter! Happy birthday and keep checking back for updates. I should have the next chapter up within the next week, since they cut my hours at work, I will have a little extra time to write hopefully! Thanks again for the review! [Ashley]