Date: 05/02/08 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
Sorry it took me a while to get these reviews out to you, my internet connection has been acting up a lot lately, so I decided to copy and paste your story on Microsoft word, and here I am, reading it, and typing a review on wordpad with every chapter I read, lol, so when I get internet access, I can post them all at one time =] Yay for Leighanne being able to make it out to Brian. I was LOL with the whole interation between Howie and AJ on the way to see Brian, and couldn't stop laughing with that line from AJ; "Shit man, who lit the fuse to your tampon?!" and again, AJ couldn't stop swearing, even if his life depended on it, lol. I also notice AJ's different sides coming into play within this story. Although he doesn't deal well with tragedy or an ailing loved one and acts out differently in hopes to diminish how he's feeling at the moment, I think he, along with Howie, are the only ones that were acting normal around Brian, not treating him differently or whatever, and I'm glad to know that there's a sense of normalcy that still exists, even though they know Brian's teetering on the edge of death. I'm proud of AJ and how he was able to stand firm with Brian when he let the "death" statement slip. And I really wish Brian would stop being stubborn and just go through with what he has to go through to help him get better. Hopefully Baylee will open his eyes. Great job, on to read chapter 9!! =]
Author's Response:
How could I possibly get mad at you for taking so long to get the reviews to me? LoL, you give awesome feedback, so it's definitely worth the wait. And it totally made my day today when I got online and had like 15 new reviews to respond to and they were all from you. *squee* My PR rocks! Wait, haven't I already said that before? Well, I just say it again...my PR rocks! :) Alot of people were wondering why it took so long for Leighanne to finally make an appearance, but in all honesty as much as I wanted her to finally get to Brian, I was having a bit of a hard time creating a pathway for her to come in on. It was a bit of a relief to actually get her into the picture so I wouldn't have to worry about it anymore. Besides, Brian wouldn't stop whining about the fact that she wasn't there yet. He was pretty cranky I'd say. *whistles while looking around innocently*
Ya know, I've always perceived AJ to be the one who depends on a tough guy, don't give no two shits about anything sorta attitude when on the inside he is totally breaking apart. I know that is kinda the general opinion on him, but I always find it kinda refreshing when an author writes a less cliched side of him and that's what I was hoping to do. That tough guy side is his way of dealing with everything that goes on when he is around everyone, but he is still capable of expressing his true emotions and when the moment is right he lets it out.
Again, thanks for the review. As always, I totally appreciate it and always look forward to what you have to say! :) [Ashley]
Date: 11/02/07 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
This one about made me cry in the end...but I am at work *bad Ashie* and have to control my emotions. Brian's situation just doesnt look good. He should consider his options. Leigh should kick his ass for not weighing them out better...but at least she is there now!
Author's Response:
Then you should get a job like me and work the overnight shift, then you won't have to control your emotions because you're the only one there. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 09/28/07 07:43 am Title: Chapter 8
really good.
Author's Response: Stop or you'll give me a cavity. LoL, just kidding. Glad you think so though. Thanks! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/30/07 09:40 am Title: Chapter 8
So, I'm not sure how many chapters this story is going to be.. But I hope that with all the tear jerking parts that at the end there will be a happy ending? Loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter and hoping that I'm not gonna end up in a ball of tears.. *hi 5*
Author's Response: I am not saying a word and I won't tell you how the story is going to turn out because I don't want to ruin anything, so I'm not going to give anything away. There is only two people I believe who know how the story is going to turn out. Sorry, but I can't let you be a third one. What would be the fun in knowing? LoL. You just have to read and find out! Glad you are liking it so far! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/16/07 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
maybe baylee can change brians mind about going to a "prison"? *sniffles*
Author's Response: I don't know. I don't even know how I would react if I was in Brian's position. We'll just have to see. I'm glad you are liking this so far! Keep checking back for updates because Ch.9 is already in progress. [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/16/07 05:45 am Title: Chapter 8
So sad...I hope Brian's sickies in his heart go away, but more importantly that Brian quits bein so damn stubborn and considers his options...maybe Leigh should tell him to do it for Baylee....l
Great update!
Author's Response: Hmmm...you just gave me an idea on how to reveal a secret I planned on revealing in ch.9. I'm glad you are enjoying this! And thanks for the review! Ch.9 is already in progress! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/16/07 03:32 am Title: Chapter 8
*blinks back tears*
He can NOT die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. All this heart stuff is creepy 'cause I was born with a heart murmur & it fixed itself. But the more I read this, the more I go, Eep!
Author's Response: I'm not trying to freak you out with all of the heart stuff. And honestly, I don't know how accurate my details are, but I'm trying. Don't worry because I don't think you have any cause to worry about your heart murmur, especially if it fixed itself. But tankies much for the review! Ch.9 is already in progress! [Ashley]
