Date: 07/07/08 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 20
COME BACK!!!!! I love this story and I know many others do to!!! Please come back.
Author's Response: Come back? LoL, I haven't gone anywhere. But I'm expecting to crank out an update very soon. Keep checking back and I am glad to know you're enjoying the story! :) [Ashley]
Date: 05/02/08 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
Leave it up to AJ to be the sarcastic one, lol. And I seriously didn't think Brian was gonna mentioning anything about his condition worsening, but I was wrong. Well... he didn't really mention it, he more just blurted it out in the heat of the moment. And of course, knowing AJ, he's gonna go back to the guys and tell them what he found out... or maybe I'm wrong. It's really sad witnessing everyone falling apart at the seams, but I hope a miracle happens and things turn for the better. I'm really glad that I started reading this story... even though it's got me hella emotional, it's extremely good and your writing style is superb. I've said this to you before, but I'll say it again, with the way you use your words, it's in such a descriptive manner, which makes the story so much more vivid and realistic, and your words aren't repetitve, which is really good. Personally, I tend to lose interest in a story rather quickly if the story revolves solely around just one guy, and the others make quick and small cameos... I'm all about group stories. But your story drew me in and captivated me from beginning to end, bringing me into this world of words, causing memories to resurface, causing my senses to come alive, all by simply reading words, it's quite amazing actually. Lol. All I can say is great job on this story thus far, and I seriously can't wait to read more from you. =]
Author's Response: You think it's got you emotional just reading it? Try writing it. LoL. All I've got to say is that the story is going to be emotional major until it's finished. I actually wrote the epilogue back in January because the idea for it sparked in my mind and I figured it would be better to get it written down before I forgot the idea and then I would have nothing when it came time to write it. Although don't even try asking because I am not going to tell you what happens in the epilogue. LoL. Many readers have tried asking what's going to happen throughout the rest of the story and I don't want to say because I think that just totally eliminates the whole purpose of reading it and finding out as you go along. But yeah. Thanks again for all the reviews you've left. Who knows, maybe I will have some inspiration to help me crank out another chapter soon! Hopefully... [Ashley]
Date: 03/14/08 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 20
Ashley! Guess what? I finished! Yay! Thank God for the beginning of Spring Break... gotta love that extra time right? And I was so upset when I realized I got to the last chapter of what you have so far. I'm so into this story. I find that whenever I start reading it, I have to force myself to stop, and now when I didn't have to stop, there wasn't anymore to read! Why did you do that to me!?!? lol I love this Ashley, I really do. It's so unique and it's so heartbreaking and I love how you incorporate family and friends and everything in between. You encompass everything and that's not an easy task to do. I nearly cried a couple chapters back when Baylee came outside saying he had a nightmare that Brian had left and he couldn't find him... God, so sad... poor little guy, and I love how they're having a baby girl! I wish that would happen in real life, so I'm just glad to see it in here. And I'm worried as hell that Brian's not gonna get a donor in time, and I'm wondering how this tour is going to go. Ah! I need to know! Is Brian gonna survive? I want more! More more more more more! I love it! Update soon... please? Mwah! Great job!
Author's Response: Well geez, I hadn't received a review from anybody in a long time that I hadn't bothered checking my reviews for ages. Glad I decided to tonight though. Otherwise, I would have never realized you had left me a review. Once again as always, thank you for the wonderful feedback Dani. I don't think I can tell you enough how wonderfully awesome you are. You really do give the best feedback! Unfortunately, I can't tell you whether or not Brian is going to get a donor in time. That would just ruin everything and then what would be the point of me finishing the story if I give away all of the details? Haha. Sorry, you know I love ya, but I just can't tell ya. However, if you have any ideas you would like to maybe see me use in upcoming chaps, then by all means do tell. I've got a bit of writer's block...explains the lack of updates lately I'd say. LoL. Thanks again for the reviews. I really do appreciate it! [Ashley]
Date: 02/23/08 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 20
loved the banter before the fight between aj and brian.....and im PRAYING for a john q-like moment!!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chappie. I'm trying for an update soon. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 02/23/08 09:56 am Title: Chapter 20
Oye vey1 Shock the hell outta A.J. why don';tcha Brian!?!?! Tryin' to give the poor younger man a heart-attack or what!?!?!?!
Wonderful update!!!! BRIAN BETTER GET BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Brian had to tell somebody didn't he? Of course he was rather blunt as he said it, but can't really blame him. I probably would have said the same thing. Then again, I have a pretty foul mouth for a girl so compared to Brian, mine wouldn't have been so sugar coated. I'd say it's all part of the coping process for Brian. As always, thanks for the review! I'll try to crank out an update soon, hopefully before Brian and I move to Florida. [Ashley]
Date: 02/22/08 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 20
Amazing chapter....so worth the wait! :o) I'm happy that Leigh and Brian made up...and she isn't mad at him at the moment. Poor Baylee though...he just wants time with daddy. Poor little guy. I agree with Aj though. Brian needs to stop acting like he is already dead. He's still got time left! Great update...and if you dont get one before you are in Florida....there needs to be a double update when you do get there! haha. J/K...take your time. Glad I could inspire you with this chapter!
Author's Response: I think we all agree with AJ when it comes to Brian acting like he is already dead. Then again, you can't really blame Brian. He's dealing with a shit load and I can't imagine dealing with that. I had a dream a couple months ago that I was in the same position he was and I can't even begin to describe the feelings, except that it was absolutely horrible and nightmarish. Glad you liked the chappie though and I'll try my best to get the next chappie out before I move to Florida. Thanks for the review Ashie! [Ashley]
