Reviewer: flea200429 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/15 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 25

I can't wait for you to finish the story

Reviewer: Brians_Fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/15 04:50 am Title: Chapter 25

I have mentioned how much I love this story. Your killing me with them. I cry all the way through, the settings you do, like the one between Brian and his dad, OMG I cried through the whole thing, Brian finally admitting that he's not ok, the brother moments the little snips back and forth. Baylee on Christmas morning acting like every other kid on that day, and the parents not wanting to get out of bed telling them go back to bed its too early. The sweet moment at the end with Leighann and him, your killing me with these chapters. so worth the wait, please tell me nothing going to happen to him before he's able to have that conversation with his wife, I love this story, you put your reader right into the story with the description you put into your writing, cant wait to see how this story plays out, please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for such wonderful feed back. I really am glad that you're still enjoying this! Hoping to have a new chapter out soon! :)