[Report This]Date: 06/16/07 03:49 am Title: Chapter 9
Aw...*tears up* You can NOT let Brian die!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!! I will NOT allow it!!!!!!!!!! *immediately finds donor heart & gives it to docs to do an emergency transplant* FIX HIM!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Alright Lenni, who is playing the part of God in this story. Hmmm...maybe it's the author? Haha. I'm not giving away any secrets when it comes to the plot. You will just have to see! Thanks for the review hon! I already have the next chap started. Check back soon for an update! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/30/07 09:40 am Title: Chapter 8
So, I'm not sure how many chapters this story is going to be.. But I hope that with all the tear jerking parts that at the end there will be a happy ending? Loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter and hoping that I'm not gonna end up in a ball of tears.. *hi 5*
Author's Response: I am not saying a word and I won't tell you how the story is going to turn out because I don't want to ruin anything, so I'm not going to give anything away. There is only two people I believe who know how the story is going to turn out. Sorry, but I can't let you be a third one. What would be the fun in knowing? LoL. You just have to read and find out! Glad you are liking it so far! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/19/07 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
awesome..
Author's Response: Tankies lil' sis! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/19/07 08:32 am Title: Chapter 2
aaww... *thumbs up*
Author's Response: Hehe...thumbs up is always a good sign! Can't wait to see what you think of the rest of what's been written so far, and there's a ton more to come! Tankies lil' sis! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/19/07 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
And she's back with flying colours!! Definitely thumbs up for the come back story of the year (so I hope).. A dramatic opening that draws you in and makes you want to keep reading.
Author's Response: Well I definitely appreciate that comment more then you realize. I always love getting reviews from you and I'm glad we've finally caught each other online again. Glad you are enjoying what you have read so far, lil' sis! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/16/07 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
maybe baylee can change brians mind about going to a "prison"? *sniffles*
Author's Response: I don't know. I don't even know how I would react if I was in Brian's position. We'll just have to see. I'm glad you are liking this so far! Keep checking back for updates because Ch.9 is already in progress. [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/16/07 05:45 am Title: Chapter 8
So sad...I hope Brian's sickies in his heart go away, but more importantly that Brian quits bein so damn stubborn and considers his options...maybe Leigh should tell him to do it for Baylee....l
Great update!
Author's Response: Hmmm...you just gave me an idea on how to reveal a secret I planned on revealing in ch.9. I'm glad you are enjoying this! And thanks for the review! Ch.9 is already in progress! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 05/16/07 03:32 am Title: Chapter 8
*blinks back tears*
He can NOT die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. All this heart stuff is creepy 'cause I was born with a heart murmur & it fixed itself. But the more I read this, the more I go, Eep!
Author's Response: I'm not trying to freak you out with all of the heart stuff. And honestly, I don't know how accurate my details are, but I'm trying. Don't worry because I don't think you have any cause to worry about your heart murmur, especially if it fixed itself. But tankies much for the review! Ch.9 is already in progress! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 04/29/07 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is a really good story, sad but really good. I think Brian and Isabella can end up helping esch other in the hospital...
Update soon PLEASE!
Author's Response: Glad your are enjoying the story so far! I already have chapter 8 started, so check back for an update! Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 04/29/07 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
of COURSE i love the chapters.....i just dotn like a dying brian is all...:(
Author's Response: Well darn, I don't like a dying Brian either, but it really makes for some good tear jerking drama! Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the chap! Check back for an update because I've already began chapter 8! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 04/29/07 04:01 am Title: Chapter 7
Whose Isabella's mother??? Lol.
"Look Mommy...I can walk..." Brian cackled quietly. - LOVED this!!!!! ROFLMAO!!!! *sings* "Mommy, Wow! I'm a big kid now!" Lol.
I liked this chapter, but still feel so horribly awful for Brian! My poor B-rokster!!!! *hugs him carefully* Get well, please!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Honestly, I don't know who Isabella's mother is. But I created Isabella in honor of you. I was gonna name her Lenni, but, I thought the name Isabella fitted her character better. So that was your surprise. Thank you for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed the chap. Check back for a review! Chapter 8 has already been started! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 04/24/07 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like Dr. Henrich! He's so good with Baylee! Poor Brian though. He knows whats happening to him an just...as to be expected, seems to be somewhat in denial, somewhat shocked and just... :( Now if Leigh would start being a good wife and answering her damned phone! Her hubby needs her, and Baylee will soon too!
Author's Response: Yeah, Dr. Henrich is pretty cool. I was kinda torn between his demeanor. Whether I should make him a great doctor, but a total asshole (ya know...like Dr. House on tv?) or if I should make him like he is now? I like the demeanor I went with. And yes poor Brian. I believe Leighanne will answer her phone soon! Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 04/20/07 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
it COULD be too easy...but like, at the last minute, the shipment could get in just in time.....*sniffles again after re-reading it*
Author's Response: I know, I know, but unfortunately, I'm not God so I can't control fate...LoL, heh. Glad you liked the chapter (at least I perceive that you liked the chapter?) Keep checking back for updates. I've got a semi start on the next chap so I should have it up within the next week or so. Just haven't had much time to write and started to have a slight case of writer's block. Not to worry though, I don't believe the writer's block is terminal this time. I just think my mind is finally catching up with the fact that I still have Brian stuck in the hospital and I hate hospitals in general. So like I said, keep checking back for an update! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 04/20/07 09:59 am Title: Chapter 6
wooooooheeee....GREAT! I like your story pretty much!!! Keep up the good work!! Greetz from Germany!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you are liking the story so far! Keep checking back for updates. I'm hopin to have a new chap posted soon! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you are liking the story so far! Keep checking back for updates. I'm hopin to have a new chap posted soon! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 04/18/07 04:31 am Title: Chapter 6
he could get one of those plastic fake/but real hearts! like an artificial one! *wipes tears*
Author's Response: Hmmm, maybe he could, but c'mon now...don'tcha think that would be a little too easy? LoL, besides I called the heart factory and they are currently out of the plastic-silicon material needed to construct the artificial heart. Good news is they will be receiving a shipment of the material. Bad news is the shipment won't arrive until I am finished writing the story... LoL, thanks for the review! I really appreciate it and keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
