[Report This]Date: 04/17/07 08:05 am Title: Chapter 6
*screams* NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT!!!!! NOT ON MY BIRTHDAY BUSTER!!!!!!!!!! BREATHE!!!!!!!!!! RELAX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm as scared as you are B-rok!!!!!! The whole death thing....*shudders*.....I change the subject- sing IWITW!!!! That always helps me for a while!!!! [haha, advice to a fic character - but this is MY B-rok we're talkin' about!]
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! LET HIM LIVE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Haha, Lenni. Always my most enthusiastic reviewer! You're awesome and I am glad you enjoyed the chapter! Happy birthday and keep checking back for updates. I should have the next chapter up within the next week, since they cut my hours at work, I will have a little extra time to write hopefully! Thanks again for the review! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 04/10/07 06:10 am Title: Chapter 5
Oye vey. Just - give him a new heart! You/they can NOT let Brian die!!!!!!! *desperate wail* I'm just as scared as he is!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL, I know you want him to get a new heart, Lenni, but ya got to remember that hearts do not grow on trees. Extra hearts aren't exactly in abundance. LoL. Glad you liked the chap and thanks for the review! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 04/03/07 07:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Soo sad.. even more when she was talking about Brian when he was a little boy... Hey did you get the sunglasses idea from Big Daddy. lol I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next. Sorry for the delay on the review.
Author's Response: Come to think of it, I think I might of gotten the sunglasses idea from Big Daddy without even realizing it. Thanks for the review. Chapter 5 is almost finished and should be posted soon! Keep checking back! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 04/01/07 12:04 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow...what an emotional chapter. It couldnt have turned out better. Completely amazing, Ash! Baylee is just too adorable for words but I feel so bad for Harold and Jackie. Please update soon...I love this story!
Author's Response: Well, hot damn! Where you been at?! I was beginning to wonder if I would receive a review from you for this chapter 'cause I ain't seen you online in a while! Thanks for the review though! I'm glad I got my advisor's approval for this chapter for how it was written! Chapter 5 is already in the works, so I'm hoping to have it finished in the next few days. Maybe by Wednesday! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/31/07 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I just finished reading your first chapter and am blown away. You are an excellent writer. I felt like I was right there besides them seeing it all happen. This was better than awesome. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, Denise! I really do appreciate it!:) I'm glad to know that I successfully worded things descriptively so so that the reader could have a way of feeling as if they are right their watching the action. That was my goal. I have three other chapters posted so far and the 5th chapter is in the works as we speak. I'd really like to know what you think of the other three chapters! Thanks again for the review and check back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/31/07 07:59 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow. This...whole chapter---it's so somber.
Just so sad.
Author's Response: Like I've said before, I'm a drama queen when it comes to my writing. It just seems to work for me! Thanks for the review girl! I'll let you know when I update again! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/31/07 04:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Nooooooo!!! SOMEBODY DONATE HIM A HEART!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Baylee's cute! Hehe.
Author's Response: You are a riot Lenni! And of course Baylee is cute! Just look at pictures of him! Check back for updates! I should have the next chapter up within the next few days! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/25/07 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow...what a blow. Although how else was Kevn supposed to tell Brian's parents that their son is dying. Baylee is so adorable though! Poor little guy. Hopefully when he sees his daddy, they're gentle with him. Awesome chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: I imagine it would be tough being in Kevin's position. Baylee is adorable. And I'm thinking of letting him see his daddy soon. Thanks for the review. [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/24/07 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a tearjerker!
Made me cry.
Man, I was wondering when Jackie and Harold would get there.
Poor Baylee got yelled at :P
Well, anyways, you're doing good. Lots of angst
Update soon
Author's Response: I'm trying to make it a tearjerker. Guess it's working? LoL. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review and keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/24/07 09:27 am Title: Chapter 3
I know this is such a sad moment but I should really slap Kev in the back of the head for snapping at Baylee. Ohhh crap, the family is there... the next chapter is gonna be extra sad, isn't it? Loved it and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Emotions tend to take over a person's logic during rough times. Kevin shouldn't have snapped, but you can't blame him. I do believe the next chap will be somewhat of an emotional and trying chap. Thanks for the review! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/24/07 06:52 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww. You've GOT to keep writing this.
Bri Bri...and his poor family!!! AAAH!
Author's Response: Heh...well, we've already discussed all this so I'm not even going to say anything. Thanks for the review though! You know I will keep writing! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/24/07 05:56 am Title: Chapter 3
Oye vey! If I weren't on such a TMNT high, I would have cried! You can NOT let Brian die!!!!! DUE A HEART TRANSPLANT PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Ah, Lenni...you don't have to not be on a TMNT high in order to cry. Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/21/07 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww man, this is sad!!!
Author's Response: Just call me Drama Queen! LoL. Thanks for the review! Chapter 3 is already in the works so keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/21/07 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
No! *snffles* Poor Brian..poor Kevin...:o( That sucks that there is very slim chance...and Brian doesnt even know yet. Damn...talk about a shitty deal of cards! Amazing chapter though. Cant wait for 3
Author's Response: Geez, yeah, tell me about it. Poor Brian and poor Kevin! A definite shitty dealing of cards. We'll just have to see what happens... [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/21/07 03:33 am Title: Chapter 2
*blinks back tears & gasps* OMG!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOMEbody get him a new heart!!!!!!!!! STAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*wails*
You CAN'T kill him off!!! YOU CAN'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL, Lenni...I ALWAYS enjoy your reviews. You are always so enthusiastic with what you have to say, which makes reading your reviews more enjoyable. Sadly enough though, I am unable to give you any sort of word towards Brian's fate at this moment. If I told ya, it would kill the suspense, and then what would be the purpose in you reading the story? So needless to say, guess you will just half to wait. Thanks for the review and keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
