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Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 22

Brian had to be ok!! Please dont let him die!!! Great update!! Took you long ehough though! LOL!! Updates soon.

{Leigh-Anna}

Author's Response: I know, I know, I know...it took me ages to update, but it's all Darby's fault that I managed to crank out an update. So blame her than thank her! LMAO. Glad you liked the update. I'm planning on cranking out another chapter by Thursday at the latest. Thanks for the review, LA. I appreciate it! :) [Ashley]

Reviewer: UnderMYskin Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 22

Wow, I'm so glad to see an update to this story at last! Hopefully the next chapter won't be so long in the making? Really loved this chapter, you've really got a knack for writing Brian's mixed emotions. I think the relationship with his brother is written well, and I'm interested to see where that's going. Great stuff!

Author's Response: Like I said in the author's notes, it's all Darby's fault that I managed an update for this because she kicked my butt into gear with her slavedrivery. LoL. And no, I don't plan on taking so long to crank out the next chapter. In fact, the Update Forecast is calling for next Thursday. I'm really glad you liked the update and thank you so much for the review! :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 09:45 am Title: Chapter 22

Awww. Gotta love Christmas!!!! It makes most everyone happy! :D I know it makes me quite happy! So happy, I start singing Xmas carols at the end of October! Lol.

Hope all stays well & Brian HAS to get better, I tell you! He just HAS too!!!! Miracle time!!! I insist upon it! Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: I figured the family deserved some time where everything wasn't overshadowed by Brian's problems and the Holidays seemed like the best time to give them and it was close to the story line. So, yeah...but of course there will still be emotional moments and the sort. I'm glad you liked the updates and thanks for the review hon! :)

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 03:34 am Title: Chapter 4

okay...to put it bluntly...I have to take this one slowly...I can't read too much at a time. It's really well written, thus the reason I'm having issues over here. Your detail to each person's emotions is great and i can really relate to each of them. I appreciate that you have put so much time into this story, making it true to life and how people handle these things. I'll read more soon!

Author's Response: Awww, Shaniqua! *hands you a tissue* I's sowwy I makin' you sad! Thanks for the wonderful compliments and feedback! [Ashley]

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/08 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

oh heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell freaking no! You can't let Brian die, are you INSANE?!?! I'm like in tears over here, I hope you know! I can't believe he's having issues again. The whole thing is too real...I was in 3rd grade when my dad had his first heart attack...it killes 1/3 of his heart and they didn't expect him to live...he's had a couple more since then, a couple strokes and a lot of other related issues...So, I can picture it all clearly and it's really tuggin at my heart! I know how hard it it to be the one waiting, the frustration AJ feels, the nervousness of Kevin and everything. I am definately feeling the emotions of the story, Ahley. Very well written!

Author's Response: Trust me, it's even harder to be the one writing this. I feel like a major poop. LoL. I'm glad you seem to be liking this so far and I hope you continue to read and review. Thanks for the feedback Shaniqua! [Ashley]

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

sorry...can't talk...gotta get to the next chapter....

Author's Response: LMAO, Shaniqua, you never cease to amaze me with your antics... [Ashley]

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

That was such a sad chapter :( I hope that they are able to get ahold of Leighanne soon! And poor Baylee, he has no clue what's going on. You could really feel how scared and alone he felt in those first few paragraphs. Great job, Ashley!

Author's Response: I thought it would be appropriate to delve into Baylee's psyche a bit and express how he is reacting to everything. It may be happening to Brian but everyone around him is affected by it also, and I'm trying to show that. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yeah, no wonder Nick is annoyed! I mean the poor guy was up all night and no one bothered to call him and tell him what they knew. Jeez. And I can only imagine what Kevin is going through, shitty deal. I can totally picture him pacing around like that. I'm glad Brian's parents finally arrived, I hope they are able to see Brian soon. Great chapter, hun!

Author's Response: I think Nick reacted rather mildly compared to how I would have reacted, but to everyone their own. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow what a chapter! So Brian had a heart attack, eh? Definitely not a good thing.. I wonder how his family is going to react to that, obviously not well. Still really awesome writing! I love it!

Author's Response: I figured I might as well strike him down quick. I thought a heart attack would do the job nicely. Glad you think so also! Thanks for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm pretty sure that I read some of this somewhere before.. but I'm bored today so I'm going to start it all over from the beginning! Great start so far, Ashley! The writing is very descriptive and it's almost like you can see exactly what Brian is experiencing, which is so important for a story like this. On to the next chap!

Author's Response: Well if you read it anywhere before, it would have been here on AC. This is the only place it's ever been posted since I started writing it. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. Thanks for the feedback! Can't wait to see what else you have to say! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/20/08 10:32 am Title: Chapter 21

I'm so glad to see an update to this story. Really great chapter, it's good to see Brian trying to enjoy himself, even though he's still so conflicted with emotions. Hope you'll update again soon!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the review hon. I thought it would be a bit refreshing to allow Brian a break where he could find some time to put his problems to the side and enjoy life a little bit. Glad you enjoyed the update and thanks again for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

*rubs eyes harshly* Do my eyes deceive me or is there really a freaking update?!? *rubs eyes again* OMGOSH... THERE IS AN UPDATE!! LOL. Man... I had to come straight here and leave a review before I read this update. You beat me to the punch girl... I dunno what to say, lol. And your banner is wicked!! I love it, especially those pics of Brian, hot. Okay... so this story is not about portraying how hot Brian is, but it's hard not to say this or think it when you look at the banner, lol. Alright, I shut the hell up now and get to reading, yay!! =] Oh yah, you made Sharky's night, satisfied his hunger and just for you I'll get a update of SP out. =]

Author's Response: *le squee* An SP update?! Total shibby there dude! Can't wait to read it! I'd say I'm glad you enjoyed the update, but seeing as you left a review before reading it...LoL. Thanks for the review PR. Haha. [Ashley]

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 21

Amazing update...so worth waiting roughly...160 days for. haha. Baylee is adorable. I love his innocence and joking with his daddy...and them gaining up on Nick was priceless. I laughed out loud many time....haha. I'm glad to see Brian actually having a good time for Baylee for his birthday. Very touhing! :) Another update please....before December??? lol Ya know I gotta give you a hard time....

Author's Response: I'm pretty certain there will be another update before December. Possibly another update before July is done. No promises on that one though. Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 04:42 am Title: Chapter 21

Perfect! I am amazed and happy again! Keep on working!! YAY

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 03:13 am Title: Chapter 21

*grins* I'm glad they were able to throw Baylee a fantastic party! It was highly entertaining & great to see Brian happy for once. :)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response:

*grins* Lenni's my first reviewer! Yay! Glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks for the review! [Ashley]