[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
This chapter shook me to the core.. esp. the last part when Kev said well you know.. It just felt so real and I'm guessing that it had to do with Brian's heart problem back then.. Great Job! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I am very happy to know that I am working out the emotions right in the story so far. I wasn't sure about the flow of this chapter, but I guess I got it right. Glad I tugged at your emotions chord. Thanks for the review and keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh no!!!! Don't kill my baby!!! I love Brian!!! Ok, I guess you can kill him if you need to, but I promise you I will cry if you do! -lol I about cried just now!!!
Author's Response: I'm not saying a word about what's gonna happen. Actually, truth be told, I am still trying to decide. Thanks for the second review! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey! Never read anything of yours but I'm totally impressed! It's off to a wonderful start and very well written! I'm excited to have found yet another story to read (haha as if I need more) anyway great job! I look forward to reading the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and positive feedback! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh no!
Man, that made me cry!
That is so sad though. When are they going to get a hold of Leigh?
UPDATE SOON! :P ^_^
You're doing great
Author's Response: Seriously made you cry? Guess I am doing something right! I'm hoping they get a hold of Leigh soon...but who knows? Thanks for the review! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it its so sad, but please pretty please but more Nick
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Can't say I'm sorry it is sad, LoL, because that's the purpose of it. But I promise that Nick will make more of an appearance. Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 08:39 am Title: Chapter 2
You've sucked me into reading this, even though it totally freaks me out and makes me completely neurotic.
You're gonna keep writing it, right?
Author's Response: Sorry it freaks you out and of course I'm going to keep writing it. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/20/07 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Mmk...I like this fic, but I generally cannot read this stuff, because it freaks me out.
Author's Response: I guess I can kinda understand? [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/14/07 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy shit wow! What an amazing first chapter, and a heck of a place to leave off. Damn! You sure do have a knack for drama and detail that just makes all of it come to life! I missed your stuff, and I want to know what happens....so update soon! Loved it! I think this may be a new fave for me! :o)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it and sorry it took me so long to reply to your review. But guess what?! I finished and posted the second chap! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/13/07 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Seems pretty interesting so far, nice to see a story with good grammar and no spelling mistakes!
I will be adding this to my favorites!!
I think it's pretty obvious that it's more than just his kid being sick. But I'm hoping to see what it is! Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive feedback/review! I really do appreciate it! I'm working on the second chapter right now and should have it posted soon! Keep checking back for new updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! This is awesome!!! Althought I do hope this never happens to Brian or anyone for that matters.. but the way you written this is amazing and I really can't wait to see how you're gonna go on with this. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, hon! There should be an update soon! So check back! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow... Way to start a story! Hope Brian is okay. Sounds like he's having a heart attack.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Mellz Bellz! I really do appreciate it and it inspires me to write more knowing that those who are reading it are enjoying what has been written so far. Please check back soon for an update! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 05:13 am Title: Chapter 1
*gasps* OMG!!!!! OMG!!!!! OMG!!!!!
BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAKE-UP!!!!!!!!!!
Honestly, I think he had a heart-attack! *wails* WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Awww, Lenni! It is so nice to read a review from you. You are a very enthusiastic reviewer. I think it's great! Check back soon for the next chapter. I'm quite a bit done with writing chapter 2 so it shouldn't be long. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 04:49 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!
That's so sad
Great story though.
Really detailed, so we can get a feel of what the character's going through.
Keep up the great work.
Update soon ;)
Author's Response: Detail is a big thing to me and I'm glad the readers are feeling the emotions I was trying to convey. Glad you ejoyed the first chapter! Keep checking back for updates! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I want more!Update soon! ;)
Author's Response: I want more of the story too! For real though, I'm expecting the next chapter to be finished and posted soon. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 04:11 am Title: Chapter 1
KEEP WRITING!!! Welcome back!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and keep checking back for updates. I'm expecting to have the next chapter finished and posted very soon! [Ashley]
