Date: 01/23/08 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 18
This is so sad, you describe everything so beautifully and heartbreaking all at the same time. Glad to see an update.
Author's Response: Ah, what a wonderful way to end an overnight shift at work. Glad you liked the update and it makes me feel better to know that I am describing things decently. Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it! [Ashley]
Date: 01/02/08 03:38 am Title: Chapter 17
good story!
Author's Response: Thanks. [Ashley]
Date: 11/19/07 12:33 am Title: Chapter 17
Awesome chap! Brian needs to agree to record his song though...the lyrics were incredible! :o) Kev and Kris are gonna have a baby too? aww...how sweet. lol. Hopefully the tour will go alright...with Bri's health and all. Time will tell though.
Author's Response: Ya know, at first I wasn't sure how I was going to be able to continue stretching the fic out without it ending up being too short. But then I realized that I have quite a lot of stuff to include before it all ends and now I'm wondering how I'm going to be able to fit it all in without the fic ending up being extremely long. It's funny how the table turns like that. Glad you liked the chap though and tankies for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 11/17/07 05:52 am Title: Chapter 17
Oye vey Brian! RECORD THE DAMNED SONG!!!!!!!! Yeesh! It almost made me cry! I must go hunt it down now - lol.
I feel horrible for them all, but happy Brian's getting to record the album he so badly wants to record. And happy for Kevin & Kristin too of course.
Oye. Turmoil of emotions here - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL, tankies much Lenni! And yes of course I plan on updating. I just hope it doesn't take two weeks again like last time. Lets hope huh? LoL. [Ashley]
Date: 11/17/07 05:51 am Title: Chapter 17
this WONT be the last time! brian WILL get better! or else i will be pissed at g-d for him!!!!!!
Author's Response: Man, I'm glad I'm not God then. LoL. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 11/11/07 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
n the beginning, Nick and B were bickering like a couple of teenage girls....lol. But God....Bri forgot his meds....he should really let Nick take him to the hospital. Now I am caught up and you must update because I want to read more!!! I wanna know what happens!!!
Author's Response: *roflmao (<----- And this is bad because I am at work right now)* Brian and Nick bickering like a couple of teenage girls? That's freakin hilarious! Brian and Nick are too much alike. They are both way too stubborn which only tends to create more conflict in their relationship, but I think I finally mended that problem some what. They didn't want to do it, but I finally sat them down one day and said they would just have to deal with it. I told them it was time to kiss and make up. Unfortunately, Nick took my metaphoric example seriously and when he puckered his lips, Brian fainted. Now Brian is mad at me because he says I tried to make Nick kiss him. Damn stubborn story characters. *shakes head* Once again, tankies for the review Ashie! [Ashley]
Date: 11/11/07 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 15
Poor Baylee...he doesnt understand why Daddy cant play with him like he used to....poor little guy...and Ooohh...Brian got some nighttime lovin! hehe. Bet that strengthened his heart temporarily! And Nick is starting to come to his senses. Bout time, since the others are still walking on egg shells. Hope Bay understands Daddy is going away for the day and Bri better give Nicky a chance!
Author's Response: Gotta feel for the poor kid. I mean, he's too young to understand what is going on as it is and now there are limitations to the interaction he gets with his daddy. I feel bad for what I am doing to Brian, so I had to give him a little night time lovin'. He at least deserves that much! LoL. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 11/11/07 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 14
Wow...Brian sure did make a mess! Sorry, didnt mean to make humor out of a bad situation. I would have done the same thing in that situation. Hopefully Leigh can help him get through this and that he didnt scare Baylee too badly.
Author's Response: Ok, so I have yet ANOTHER confession to make. Like I said in my response to the previous chapter's review, this chapter is a revised version of a chapter for one of my other fics that I started a couple years ago but then trashed (December Snow). Man, am I terrible or what? At least I am plagerizing my own work. Haha. I'm just kidding. But like I said for the previous review, the content in the chapter fit perfectly for the situation that was going on so I decided to use what I had on file. I think it worked out good. Tankies for the review Ashie! [Ashley]
Date: 11/11/07 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
AJ and Nick are too much. When they are together, its hysterical trouble! I feel for Brian though...he wants to feel part of the group still, yet he does seem to be pushing them away...and they only want wants best for him. What a mess...hopefully he is okay though with the way he bolted from the room like that. Awesome chap
Author's Response: Ok, so I have a little confession to make, and I figure I can tell you since you are my advisor for ITNC (even though if anyone else decides to read my reviews then they will find this out also). Part of this chapter is actually part of a chapter I used for another story I started a couple years ago (Eye Of The Beholder). The story got trashed, but I still had the chapter on file and I thought it was befitting for what was going on in ITNC, so I used the scene for the outline for this chap. I think it worked out well. Glad you liked it and tankies for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 11/07/07 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
YAY - Brian got to go home! But he needs to appreciate his friends being there for him. Its ok to be scared and upset...but they just wanted to surprise him...jeesh! Sounds like Bri and Bay are going to be lookin out for one another...how sweet. :)
Author's Response: Brian has one too many emotional demons beating him up right now and he just don't know how to handle it. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 11/04/07 12:13 am Title: Chapter 11
Brian sure is throwing a pity party for himself!!! The press conference went as well as could be expected...i guess...but Brian is right in thinking that those piranas will twist their words to make it more 'exciting' Its sickening, really. I hope Nick doesnt disappear again...despite Brian telling him to leave...he needs his friends there...awesome chap...and ima catching up!!!
Author's Response: Can you blame Brian for throwing a pity party? LoL. Thanks for the review Ashie! [Ashley]
Date: 11/03/07 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
The media needs to leave them alone...but thats all they are good for...making bad situations worse. At least Nick opened his eyes and went with AJ to the hospital. And I think Baylee knows a lot more than what everybody thinks. He's a smart kid!
Author's Response:
AJ didn't leave Nick any choice but to go with him and kids know alot more then we give them credit for. Baylee might not understand it, but he does know that something is going on. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 11/03/07 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
Holy shit..Leigh is pregnant again...thats just cruel, Ash...making Brian dying and may never see his new baby. Leigh is acting like a frigid bitch though...I could never act that way if it were Anthony...I'd be there constantly, showing him as much affection and care as I always do. Fuck being scared...he needs his wife! Sounds like Kevin and Kristin may have a little one coming too... awesome chapter...:)
Author's Response: Well, put yourself in Leigh's position. I mean, she goes away, leaving a "healthy" husband at home to wait for her to return and suddenly she receives a phone call informing her he's had a heart attack and is in the hospital. I'd be pretty damned scared off my knocker if it were me. But thanks for the review! You're finally catching up! [Ashley]
Date: 11/03/07 09:41 am Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the best written fanfics I've ever read. Please give us more soon!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! That makes me feel pretty darn good. The story is posted all the way to Chapter 16 so far. Dunno if you have read it all yet, or if you had and are just leaving a review for Chapter 1. Anywho, thanks for the awesome compliment! [Ashley]
Date: 11/03/07 06:22 am Title: Chapter 16
Oye vey. DAMMIT BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!! Something could be more wrong than you jsut forgettting your medication!!!!!!!! *curses wildly* LET HIM BE ALRIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Well yeah, something could be more wrong then the lack of medication. But what about the fact that him and Nick finally made up? LoL. I mean, they were kinda acting like children... Thanks for the review Lenni! [Ashley]
