Date: 04/07/07 01:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Ooh. Interesting. More soon please
Date: 04/07/07 12:40 am Title: Chapter 4
this is one interesting story cant wait till you update again..
Date: 03/31/07 03:49 am Title: Chapter 3
*Raises eyebrow* What do they need them for?? oohh I'm curious lol. Update soon.
Date: 03/29/07 07:07 am Title: Chapter 3
This sounds good so far, can't wait to see where this is going!! Update soon please!! =)
Date: 03/29/07 04:34 am Title: Chapter 3
This is one odd ball story...not sure what type of story it is..but its interesting and I like it :)
Date: 03/24/07 03:38 am Title: Chapter 2
OOOooooo I like this story already...i feel something is going to happen and its gonna be worse then the bus situation..great job update soon
Date: 03/23/07 05:08 am Title: Chapter 2
sounds good, update soon.
Date: 03/23/07 03:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow...lol. Interesting. But good =) More soon please.
Date: 03/19/07 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like something out of a horror movie or something... I liked how the beginning was very abrupt and kind of in your face just like an accident would be.
Date: 03/18/07 12:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh can't wait to find out what happens...update!
Date: 03/17/07 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this so far. Update soon please, i'm anxious to see what happens next =)