Date: 07/20/07 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 19
Damn right they've all lost something and they need to get him back or figure it out soon!!!
Great chapter update soon please :D
Author's Response: Working on it right now!! =)
[Report This]Date: 06/06/07 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
ARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!! Don't black out in a room, especially a dark room with 2 guys feeling you up thats just as bad if not worse than dropping the soap just without the audience!!!
He's not Nick's lawyer appointed by the guys is he???
Great update MORE MORE please? :D
Author's Response: Haha, your wish is my command!! More is on its way!! And we shall see about this... lawyer!! =)
[Report This]Date: 06/05/07 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
wow does he have a death wish or what love it update soon
Author's Response: Lol. Wait, does who have a death wish?!? Please forgive me, I'm sooo freaking late!! Lol. Sometimes, I wonder if I'm blond or something, I should be anyhow, I have my moments!! =P But not to worry, update is on it's wayy!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/31/07 05:42 am Title: Chapter 17
Sheesh and they can't even recognize him either!!!
Bet they switched all the details with some John Doe once they've done the autopsy huh???
Great update can't wait for next update!
Author's Response: Haha!! Let me just tell you... you're DAMN good!! Lol. But as for what's gonna happen, we're just gonna have to wait and see. =( Lol. But I'm just gonna leave it at that, you're good!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/26/07 08:39 am Title: Chapter 16
OH CRAP!!!!
another update soon please!!! :D
Author's Response: Update coming soon!! Thanks for ALL your reviews btw!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/25/07 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 16
Just caught up with this one and I'm hooked. As dark as it is I love how you still throw bits of humor into it such as the whole scene betwen Danny and Nick (which had me dying by the way lol) Coincidentally (or maybe not) Jeffery Donner is actually the name of quite a famous serial killer. Not sure if you knew that or not. I'm getting suspicions though that these cops are pretty corrupt. I mean beating up on Nick like that.. And doesn't Nick think its funny that he doesn't even get a trial. I thought everyone regardless of their crime had the right to a "fair and just" trial. So thats just my prediction!
Author's Response: Lol. Yess... you are catching on rather quickly!! And I did know Jeffery Donner was the name of a famous serial killer (I learned that from watching that movie with Johnny Knoxville) I was going to mention something about that, but I thought it'd be corny. Lol. And with the whole fair and just trial thing, it ties in with Incomplete. I knew it'd throw people off, but this dude has people working for him, and you caught on to that. Lol. But more is coming, and it's only going to get more corrupt... I think. Lol. Thanks for the review!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/23/07 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
he's in on it too!!!! these bastards pop up everywhere, like fucking rabbits LOL instead these are pigs!!!!
great update hope to see another soon :D
Author's Response: LMAO. You are truly too much!! But yess, they are just popping outta nowhere!! It's what they do best. And it's only going to get more interesting... ;) Not to worry, an update is coming soon!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/16/07 07:48 am Title: Chapter 14
*bites fingernails* Oh dear....I'm gonna get a sex change and commit some crime as save Nick from them...LOL
Great chapter seriously can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Lol. You're too much!! =P But yess, next chapter is on it's way!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/11/07 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
stupid Johnny! lmao And poor Nick I hope they help him fast! update soon please =)
Author's Response: Update will come soon, promise!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/11/07 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
Damn looks like Johnny was witholding info too... Nick's stuck in jail and they have no idea whats going on!
Great chapter lol :D
Author's Response: Lol. Yup. But things are only going to worsen, for things will start to not make sense.
[Report This]Date: 05/09/07 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 11
I knew those cops were bad news! Besides the fact that finding someone guilty without trial is illegal, it's a great chapter!lol Poor Nick, the boys better get him out of there!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know it's illegal and all, but you gotta refer back to Incomplete. This character, Jeffery Donner, has A LOT of people working for him, so it seems like it's the boys word against everyone else's. But thanks for the review Sam!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/09/07 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
Bastards are in on it!!! Damn... looks like the guys have some work to do to help Nick and bring the bad dudes down!!!
Another great chapter :D
Author's Response: Yess... a lot of work indeed, and things will only get worse. Oops, did I mention too much?!? Lol. Glad you're enjoying the story, hope my future chapters don't dissapoint you!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/09/07 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
HA I KNEW IT!!!!
Dude it was self defense, let him go for pete's sake.
Great chapter :D MORE...please *flutters eyelashes* lol
Author's Response: Lol. I'm almost complete with the next chapter and I will have it up by today... or tonight, whatever the case may be (I reside in Hawaii so the timing completely throws me off! Lol.) Thanks for the reviews Moppy!! =)
Date: 05/07/07 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh by the way.... HOW THE FUCK DID THEY FIND HIM IN McDONALDS!!!!!
Donut King sure, but Mcdonalds???
Author's Response: Lol. I'm not sure why McDonalds. I heard he lost a lot of weight btw. Thanks for the review!! =)
[Report This]Date: 05/07/07 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
OH SHIT!!! It's the dude, they found the dude!!!!
Great chapters to the story so far, *sigh* no I gotta wait for an update *folds arms and huffs* LOL
Author's Response: Not to worry, update is on it's way!! =)
